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    Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.

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    • APHOTICMOTH
      APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

      Super cute. I love the shade of blue on version 3. Gives a night time feeling.

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      • animatosoor
        animatosoor @APHOTICMOTH last edited by animatosoor

        @CLCanadyArts Hehe thank you, Cassandra! I'm also getting more of a night-time feeling from that one than I was from the original! πŸ˜„

        https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

        The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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        • APHOTICMOTH
          APHOTICMOTH Moderator @animatosoor last edited by

          @animatosoor I think it's easier on the eyes as well, could be just me, but the original was harsh enough blue that I didn't want to look, insta headache, in print would probably be a lot different without the blinding backlight on my computer.

          It would be lovely to see a little collection of pieces like this in a book.

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          • MichaelaH
            MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

            I like the original strong bright color, but 3 goes also for me. I think the most ppl the original color is to strong, I found it very refreshing in the point, nobody else is doing it and I was drawn to it.

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            • Heather Boyd
              Heather Boyd @animatosoor last edited by

              @animatosoor

              I like 1 and 3. 3 is a bit softer but 1 original blue brighter for me portrays a more active sandman -because it is about him and his daily duties. πŸ™‚

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              • Susan Marks
                Susan Marks @animatosoor last edited by

                @animatosoor I think the color changes you're exploring think it's helped make your piece more dreamy. I like them both, with a #3 winning by a bit.

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                • Susan Marks
                  Susan Marks @Heather Boyd last edited by

                  @Heather-Boyd interesting point--about keeping the active sandman brighter or more saturated than the sleeping man.

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                  • animatosoor
                    animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                    @CLCanadyArts Yikes, I didn't realise it might have been headache-inducing! 😳 Thank you for your input; I will be keeping it in mind as I choose colours in the future. Definitely learning with every new piece on this thread.

                    And yes, I am in the process of sketching new ideas for more poems I'd like illustrated, and eventually I'd want to compile them! It's nice to hear I won't be the only one interested in that outcome. :face_savouring_delicious_food:

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                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                    • animatosoor
                      animatosoor @MichaelaH last edited by

                      @MichaelaH I appreciate that - thanks! I'll be going for #3. πŸ™‚

                      @Heather-Boyd Thank you - that is an interesting take, and something for me to consider for my next piece.

                      https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                      The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                      • animatosoor
                        animatosoor @Susan Marks last edited by

                        @Susan-Marks Your initial comment helped immensely with that. Thanks once again. 😊

                        https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                        The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                        • animatosoor
                          animatosoor last edited by animatosoor

                          It's Monday here!

                          Final:
                          Sandman_Final_Small.jpg

                          Thank you everyone for all of your invaluable input. Moving on to the next project. 😌

                          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                          • animatosoor
                            animatosoor last edited by

                            Week 3!

                            Thumbnails and a set of slightly more comprehensible idea sketches for a new illustration I'm working on. This would be my first attempt at a double-page spread for my portfolio, and also my first serious attempt at including animal characters in any composition. :S I'm quite nervous, lol.

                            thumbnails.jpg

                            Sketches.jpg

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                            • Jonas Zavacky
                              Jonas Zavacky @animatosoor last edited by

                              @animatosoor I like the third option. The expressions of the characters are clear and the character themselves look just funny πŸ˜ƒ

                              Maybe you can try the foreground bush on the first page to overlap the box ? (i am not exactly sure what it is) . The perspective feels kinda flat to me - so this might help it.
                              But I like that you added the mark behind it instead of the cow. That on the other hand is deepening the perspective well πŸ™‚

                              Anyways it looks fun! Good luck πŸ˜ƒ

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                              • animatosoor
                                animatosoor @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                                @Jonas-Zavacky Hi, and thank you so much for your feedback!

                                I realise what’s on the foreground on the first page looks like a bush, but it’s meant to be the leaves of a tree and we have a bit of a bird’s eye view with this one, so you’re right, it should overlap the box a little bit.

                                As for the box itself: your comment made me smile, lol, because I think the concept hardly makes sense to begin with and it’s perfectly understandable that you don’t know what it is. Let me have another go at the box and see if I can make that bit make a bit more sense. XD I might also eventually add a page before this to give this weird structure some context, haha.

                                Thanks again. πŸ™‚

                                https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                • animatosoor
                                  animatosoor last edited by

                                  I've worked on it a bit more, and now I have this. I have experimented with adding a couple more details in an attempt to provide some context, but I'm thinking this still may not be making sense to viewers. I would like to hear how you guys interpret this!

                                  sketch4.jpg

                                  https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                  The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                  • animatosoor
                                    animatosoor last edited by

                                    Fifth iteration - with several changes, in an attempt to make the idea clearer:

                                    sketch5.jpg

                                    https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                    • Heather Boyd
                                      Heather Boyd @animatosoor last edited by Heather Boyd

                                      @animatosoor I like more characters in number one but I agree with @Jonas-Zavacky about the expressions. If you could add more expression to #1 that would be good. I also like the spacing in #1 vs #2 but haha now I see you have committed to the last one πŸ™‚ anyways -still really cute.

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                                      Be blessed,

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                                      • Susan Marks
                                        Susan Marks @animatosoor last edited by

                                        @animatosoor I like how this is coming along. In earlier versions I wondered if the box was something that was melting-which I was curious about. Now it looks like the ground has grown over it? how, why?

                                        Are you leaving for text? If not-the right hand side looks vacant compared to the left.

                                        It's fun to see how you're developing this.

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                                        • animatosoor
                                          animatosoor @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                          @Heather-Boyd Yeah, I removed the cow after versions #1 and #2 after a while, as I began to worry if there was just too much going on. If I could still find a way to add it in and make it work, I'll do so.

                                          Thanks, Heather. πŸ™‚

                                          https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                          The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                                          • animatosoor
                                            animatosoor @Susan Marks last edited by

                                            @Susan-Marks Thank you! I can see now why the box previously would have looked like it was melting, but yes, your latest guess about the ground comes close. It's a river that's nonsensically being held up, but apparently the way I've drawn the water, it still doesn't read that way yet, haha.

                                            Yes, I'm leaving room for text, and I plan for it to be on the second page.

                                            https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                                            The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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