Godzilla's next challenger WIP

rachy

@Aleksey tee-hee! Yay it's there! I kinda wanted to play with that a little bit but not too literally

ShannonBiondi

I really like your C thumbnail. I like the conjuring idea but also like how everything works together in this one in term of composition. You get a good sense of everything that's going on.

rachy

I've played with the thumbnails a bit more here to try out different placements of the fairy mouse. I quite like C2 or D1 what do you think?
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rachy

@ShannonBiondi thanks Shannon!

theprairiefox

I think I like C2 over D1. I like having godzilla's shape. It helps it read.

ShannonBiondi

@rachy I love D3 but I think the Godzilla silhouette from C1-C3 would work better. So a combination of C1 and D3 basically!

Heather Boyd

@rachy C1/D1 are my favorite of your changes because their is space from your fairy mouse and the edge of the paper (helped by the smoke stack). I wish C1 fairy mouses wand zapper more closely resembled D1's -coming out closer to the fairy mouse. I agree though I prefer seeing Godzilla in C1!

rachy

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rachy

@ShannonBiondi @Heather-Boyd @theprairiefox thank you I'm going to take C1 and mix some of the other bits in like the wand from D1 , I'm trying to work out how to make the conjured mouse look a bit more monsterous here's how that's going so far...

rachy

I've been colouring it in, I want to give the feeling that it's in a polluted city and have tried to use colder colours for the mouse and her magic to highlight her a bit more.
I could just keep painting and painting this one so knowing when to call it done is hard! I kinda want to keep the city loose, but how loose? I'd be grateful if you have any thoughts or if there are any glaring mistakes?

Thanks
Rach
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theprairiefox

@rachy this is coming along nicely. I wanted to let you know that initially I didn't read that the smoke from the wand was what was creating the large mouse. I saw it as smoke from a smokestack or something. I think it might be to do with the perspective and that the electricity lines are the same width even as they travel away from the viewer.

I think if you played with that a bit it might read more powerfully.

Good luck!

Kat

I think the city looks good - muted colors, not too many details. I'm thinking that the expression on the large mouse doesn't quite seem challenging. With a small smile and the eyebrow shape, it almost seems placating, like the mouse doesn't want godzilla to get mad or something. Maybe tweak that, add a little more vibrance to the fairy mouse so she doesn't fade into the surroundings. I love the angle you used, very dramatic Nice work!

rachy

Thank you @Kat and @theprairiefox I've tweaked it from your suggestions

I've tried to give more perspective to the magic and tried to make the conjured mouse/rat avatar thingy a bit more angry and challenging looking..

What do you think are there any other tweaks you would make?

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Kat

That definitely looks more challenging, good job!

rachy

Thanks so much for your thoughts everyone it's really helped me push this one and learn some things xX

theprairiefox

@rachy the magic is coming through much clearer. Good job!

rachy

@theprairiefox thank you! It's so helpful that you pointed that out xX