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    "The Moment Before I Lost My Mom" Kids Book Project Progress for SCBIW Portfolio Preview. . .and eventually Self Publish by April 2020

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      UPDATE!
      Helloooooo Art Peeps,
      I'm back! My business trip was amazing! It was quite eventful and I learned a lot. Some sad news though, while up there in St. Louis, my truck broke down and it was a bit of an expensive fix. So I'm going back to full time at work again 😞

      But I guess that just means I'm gonna have to give up a few other things in order to finish this book at the dummy book deadline on Sep 1st.

      I don't know about you all, but I'm a very social person, and thats probably why I usually don't get much illustrations work done. I'm just gonna have to hang out with my Ipad during the weekends instead of my chums. My poor buddies are going to think I fell of the side of the earth. hahaha, Oh well. At least there is FaceTime to prove I'm still alive.
      But I'm determined to create this thing!

      Oh! also, I accidentally gave my number to a little 20-year old while in St. Louis, and now he wont stop texting me! ugh!

      My progress from over last week and this weekend.

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      #3
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      #2
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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        @Squirrel-Size lookin' good!

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          Yeah, going back to full time at work is making it super hard! I managed to finish drawing spread #2, but I just barely touched my two spreads from last week. It didn't help that I had several pre engagements this weekend. But the good news! This next weekend is empty! Which means I'm going to be sitting on my butt drawing all weekend to catch up! Only two weeks left before my drawing deadline! And four weeks to have my dummy-book printed out and done. This week, I'm going to start on the cover. I'll be posting more thumbnails on that later this week.

          My goals for the next several weeks:

          Aug18-24: finish spreads #4 & #7, Cover thumbnails and start cover

          Aug 25-31: Final drawing edits and final details added to spreads, Finish cover, drawing and color.

          Sept 1-7: Formate book, Print

          Sept 8 - 13 Bind book

          Due Date for the Open Portfolio Preview at Mid central SCBWI Conference Sept 14th

          After the SCBWI conference, I'm going to take a little break, then start the process to finishing the book and have it out my late March 2020

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          • BichonBistro
            BichonBistro @Elizabeth Rose last edited by BichonBistro

            @Squirrel-Size best wishes in meeting your goals!

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            • Elizabeth Rose
              Elizabeth Rose @BichonBistro last edited by

              @BichonBistro Thanks! I appreciate it πŸ™‚

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              • Whitney Simms
                Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

                I love this so much! The artwork is wonderful and this story is just a pure piece of you and your mom! Amazing! Can't want to see layout #2 painted. Love the use of depth of field. You really move through the image.

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose @Whitney Simms last edited by

                  Awe! Thanks @Whitney-Simms Thats so sweet πŸ™‚ I'm just itching to start coloring it!

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                    I was thinking, this would be a sweet book to sell at a flowershop for the bereaved who have lost their mothers and especially for kids who lose their mothers. It could be so comforting for a child. Even if they don't plant gardens there might be something else that would bring them peace that connected them with their mother. Cooking, reading together, etc. I love this~!

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose @MOO last edited by

                      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen awe! That is a great idea! I love it!

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                      • Elizabeth Rose
                        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                        Okay Art Peeps! Vote which book cover sketch do you Like! I think my fav right now is #3

                        #1
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                        #2
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                        #3
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                        • Kasey Snow
                          Kasey Snow last edited by Kasey Snow

                          I also like number three!

                          This will be a lovely (and hopefully very healing) book when you are done with it. πŸ™‚

                          Your garden pictures make me wonder if you have ever read The Secret Garden. If you haven't, I'd highly suggest it. It's a lovely book about healing and love, at its core. And my mental images of the garden in the book looked a lot like your real life garden that you made. I think you'd really understand the protagonist in a way that those of us who've never built a garden can't.

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                          SVS forum sketchbook: https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/9846/kasey-s-sketchbook ~
                          ~Kasey

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                          • BichonBistro
                            BichonBistro @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                            @Squirrel-Size I love #3 tooβ€”in addition to the feeling of tender closeness, it communicates that her mom will always be supporting her, has her back so to speak, and is almost like her shadow (in the good sense of the word)

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                              @Squirrel-Size I like number 2 best in these sketches. the characters are right in the center of the page but the foliage on the sides is higher on one side than the other so it seems to balance out somehow. At least for me! Sweet!

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                              • Elizabeth Rose
                                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                @Kasey-Snow Thanks, yeah! I've both read and watch the Secret Garden. I love that story! I think it could have for sure been some of the inspiration for the building of my little flower garden. Tasha Tudor was also another big inspiration for my garden building as well.

                                @BichonBistro Yeah! Thats exactly what I was going for in #3! I was wanting mama squirrel to look a shadow or an angel of sorts. I think it could really portray that when it gets colored. πŸ™‚

                                @coley yeah, I think #2 is for sure one of my top favs! Its hard to pick! Thanks for your input! πŸ˜‰

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                                • Su
                                  Su last edited by

                                  Absolutely stunning book. All your illustrations are so moving... can't wait to see the final product. Regarding the cover page, 2 and 3 are my favorites. I love them equally. Perhaps you can choose your favorite for the cover and use the other as a vignette to close the book.

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                                  • Elizabeth Rose
                                    Elizabeth Rose @Su last edited by

                                    @Su Awe! Thanks! Thats a great idea, I might just do that πŸ™‚

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                                    • Elizabeth Rose
                                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                      Almost made my goals for this week. These two spreads could use a few more hours of work, but this is how far I got. I also had my editor (my grandma, she is a retired English professor) look over my text for me. She gave me some good suggestions and yummy pancakes too! πŸ™‚

                                      Goals for this week is to finish all final details, do some last minute edits on all spreads, add final text and finish cover. A tall order! Wish me luck you all!

                                      (P.S. I'm keeping the final spread (#12) a surprise for you all!)

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                        I also choose 3 πŸ™‚

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • Elizabeth Rose
                                          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                          Okay, I've been gathering title ideas for several months now. I've gone through them all and kept only the ones that are not used by books already. Here is the collection I have:

                                          1. I Remember Too
                                          2. I'm Happy Too
                                          3. I Can Remember
                                          4. How I Remember You
                                          5. A Little Place to Remember
                                          6. Flower Squirrel

                                          What do you all think?

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                                          • Coley
                                            Coley @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                            @Squirrel-Size I like A Little Place to Remember the best πŸ™‚ But that's just one person ! I love the new sketches you posted a couple days ago!!!!

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