July WIP
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I'm sorry to say it's been quite a few months since I last posted here, but I like to jump back it and give the July challenge a go. Came up with 3 concepts and looking for some feedback on which to progress with:
1- Not super original concept of discovering treasure with a monster lurking behind the character, but I thought it would be nice to try this vertical composition.
2- Building sandcastles in an ocean (sand or sea... not decided yet) as it gets swarmed by sharks.
3- Going hot air ballooning on a sunny, but blustery day.
Thanks for any thoughts in advance
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I love 2 and 3 but I think 2 has the better story.
Also love a fat shark
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@Gary-Wilkinson Hi, Gary! Welcome back
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@sarahlawrence Thanks Sarah. If I go with 2 i'll make the shark as fat as possible lol
@Nyrryl-Cadiz It's nice to be back
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Your thumbnails are quite nice! I like the second the best for story and composition but I do like the composition of the third one as well.
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Hey Gary, gotta say I missed seeing your fabulous work in the forums. Welcome back! I like all your ideas, but I vote for #2 for its original concept and exciting and dynamic composition. Looking forward to seeing what you choose to develop.
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@Gary-Wilkinson thanks! I also LOVE the book you did with Jay Miletsky. Your illuatrations were so cute and colorful.
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@Gary-Wilkinson welcome back! Missed seeing your work around here. I like number 2, maybe cause I am working on something similar with a shark.
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@Heather-Boyd Thanks, I'll probably look into painting up 3 someday if I get around to it as it might be a nice one to put on the wall if nothing else
@Johanna-Kim Thank you so much Johanna. I've missed seeing everyone's work here too, but i've been so busy with work and a new baby that I haven't been able to put my time into the forums, but hoping to make a change to that.
@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thanks, just putting the finishing touches on the book and it will hopefully be out by the end of the year
@Chip-Valecek 2 it is then. I was thinking it could also be a nice accompaniment to the mushroom eater I did a while ago if I make the sharks camouflaged as part of the sand
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Love the story and the dutch camera angle of 2, welcome back!
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A quickpaint color test for the shark concept. Interested to hear your thoughts on it before going much further. Might try another version and convert the sand at the bottom to water which might give some nice reflections and color variety.
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It looks like I’m in agreement with the majority here. I like #2 the best. It looks like it’s got the most potential and what’s worse than sand sharks to ruin a summer vacation?? Looking forward to seeing the finished piece. And congratulations on the new baby! Lots of hard work but so much fun at the same time, especially if you can still find snippets of time here and there to make time for your artwork:)
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@Gary-Wilkinson Love the colour, this piece is a lot of fun!
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Wow, I love the colors! Looks very summer-y heh
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Wow this is great! I love the colors, any classes you’d reccommend for learning your color sense?
And I agree, I think some water towards the bottom would add some visual interest for sure!
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Welcome back Gary and congrats on the little one and the book! I've missed seeing your work here and it's good to see your new wip. I see you went with 2 (I like both 2 and 3) which is great! I gotta say, I really wish I could thumbnail and simplify like you do. And I love those fluffy clouds! I can't wait to see the progress.
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@Sean_H The color and light course at svs is very useful and so is the one over at schoolism by Dice Tsutsumi. I would say it's always useful to look at the colors other artists use too and see what works along with learning about values and color theory. 2 of my favorite artists for their color work are Ty Carter and Sam Nielson. I think Ty has a course on svs and Sam has a very intensive one over at schoolism too.
@Jon-Anderson Thanks Jon! My thumbnails come from even smaller thumbnails just to test out concepts and shapes. Non of the above arose instantly and I doubt they will remain that way in the later stages, but as long as I start with basic shapes I have less of a chance of losing way my in the painting.
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Added some water and moved around a few elements. Any better?
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Such an interesting story, wow!
I like the added water. To increase readability of the piece, I might add a bulge from the body of the shark on the left under the sand.Thank you for sharing!
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@Gary-Wilkinson I like it and agree with @KathrynAdebayo about adding a bit of bulge. Also, how about a bit more debris in the mouth of the one attacking the tower? It could be overdone for sure but maybe a little could add to the threat perception.
