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    • kai satoshi
      kai satoshi @Chip Valecek last edited by kai satoshi

      @Chip-Valecek
      lol. I like the fog on the window smiling face idea. I'll definitely keep it in mind when I'm doing the final. I also think I am leaning towards all the animals being in the pic.... although I have swapped out the stuffed rabbit with a chicken :).
      Working on the final sketch now.

      *oh and I'm taking the eyelid off the cow. Hopefully that helps the look of the cow.
      Thanks 🙂

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      • kai satoshi
        kai satoshi last edited by

        So here is the final sketch
        I know there will be differences in the final painting than the sketch, such as the christmas lights on the ball. I'm going to wait until I'm into the painting before I add them.
        But if you guys have any last suggestions I'm open to hearing.
        Thanks everyone.
        Santas Deer are sick 4.jpg

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @kai satoshi last edited by

          @Kris-Knight love the egg drop lol. I would have all the animals looking toward the ball, right now they all seem to be looking in different directions.


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          • Ace Connell
            Ace Connell last edited by

            The chicken is far better than the rabbit. The rabbit felt like it was in a different art style. I love the idea and the construction on the cow is amazing. I think the only thing letting it down now is the construction of the big. The anatomy doesn't seem right. It feels like it's got a broken neck and it's not attached, get that sorted and the piece will be stunning.

            Ace

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            • Jiří Kůs
              Jiří Kůs @kai satoshi last edited by

              @Kris-Knight is the gerbil standing in the sphere? I thought he will be running 🙂

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              • kai satoshi
                kai satoshi @Ace Connell last edited by

                @Ace-Connell I will give the pig a redraw and post when done 🙂 . thanks for the comments.

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                • kai satoshi
                  kai satoshi @Jiří Kůs last edited by

                  @Jiří-Kůs haha... yeah, running would be fun. I think I'm gonna stick with him standing that way he can look excited like he is just enjoying the view.... but running would be a good way to go also. 🙂

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                  • kai satoshi
                    kai satoshi last edited by

                    Here is a new version of the PIG. Let me know guys 🙂

                    Santas Deer are sick 5.jpg

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                    • Dulcie
                      Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                      That pig is looads better! Love his expression 🙂

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                      • kai satoshi
                        kai satoshi @Dulcie last edited by

                        @Dulcie Thanks 🙂 Glad you like.. It was definitely a good change.

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                        • Jiří Kůs
                          Jiří Kůs @kai satoshi last edited by

                          @Kris-Knight with this pose of the pig, there should be some tension in the rope, this way it looks unnatural. it seems like it is floating ignoring the weight of the pig, like in vaccuum. Yet they should drag the sledge.

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                          • mattramsey
                            mattramsey last edited by

                            great improvement on the pig!

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                            • Sarah LuAnn
                              Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

                              Haha, that pig is great! It looks like you're having a lot of fun with this.

                              Feel free to ignore this, but as someone who grew up with driving ponies it seems so weird to me that they would somehow be able to pull a sleigh without some kind of actual harness, particularly the cow and pig. Others might not fixate on that as much as me though, its just my background I guess that makes me look for that specifically.

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                              • kai satoshi
                                kai satoshi @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

                                @Sarah-LuAnn
                                Yeah, I definitely was going for the more whimsical beginning of the animal's journey. They are all freaking out (not the gerbil) and aren't working together yet. I know what you are saying about the harness :). I totally agree. I just went with the whole magic of it and less with the actual physics that would be necessary :). I appreciate the comment! Thanks.

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                                • mattramsey
                                  mattramsey @kai satoshi last edited by

                                  @Kris-Knight

                                  Ha ha those eggs. Priceless.

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                                  • kai satoshi
                                    kai satoshi @mattramsey last edited by

                                    @mattramsey
                                    Thanks matt.
                                    I was checking out your art heroes... I love all those guys too. Adam Rex's poetry is cool. and Sam Neilson is just awesome. not to mention Bobby and the others. lol

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                                      • kai satoshi
                                        kai satoshi @Guest last edited by

                                        @Damien-Rambacher
                                        Thanks! Yeah, I will revisit the batteries as I paint it... I'm like you... I'd rather not have the word but I was playing it safe. lol.

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                                        • Chip Valecek
                                          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @kai satoshi last edited by

                                          @Kris-Knight you could always do something like AAA or 9V instead of batteries.


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                                          • kai satoshi
                                            kai satoshi @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                            @Chip-Valecek
                                            Very true... I will try that and take a look 🙂

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