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    Does this horse read as a horse?

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    • braden H
      braden H @TwiggyT last edited by

      @TwiggyT Thanks 😃 I think I can live with the head being a bit too big (it does look a bit pony-ish)

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by

        Yes, it reads as a horse 🙂 I like it. It may be a little small and the head might eb a little big but, it doesn't really bother me.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • Ailantan
          Ailantan last edited by

          I think it looks like a horse but with what is called an ambling gait. It looks very refined.

          https://www.instagram.com/ailantanart/

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          • KajsaH
            KajsaH last edited by

            I love this horse! It def reads immediately 🙂 I've been riding my whole life, and sure, there are parts of the anatomy that are exaggerated but it's stylistic right, not realistic 😉 I like it! Though as @Coley mentioned, the knight is sitting a bit too far back. He's in for a bumpy ride back there 😃 His heels are on point though!
            Great work!

            https://www.instagram.com/kajsah.art/
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            • evilrobot
              evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

              No it reads as a broom 😄

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              • ?
                A Former User last edited by A Former User

                Your horse is amazing, you horse-drawing wizard you! I find horses the hardest thing to draw and make a character out of, but yours is fab! I don't think it needs to be 100% exact, as I like his nose and he has so much attitude in his body language 🙂 Maybe he should be slightly bigger, but that's all I think you need to change in my opinion 🙂

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Ailantan last edited by

                  @Ailantan I was googling for so long looking for the right term for the gait I was going for. I'm gonna have to remember that!

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @evilrobot last edited by

                    @evilrobot FINALLY someone's looking at the right horse :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: though I think @bichonbistro did, too.

                    @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I may fiddle with the head. Thanks 😃

                    @KajsaH said in Does this horse read as a horse?:

                    the knight is sitting a bit too far back

                    In my mind, he's very bad at his job 🙂 I think next time I have to draw a person riding a horse I may go take some riding lessons (fun AND informative!)

                    @hannahmccaffery I've always HAAATED drawing horses. They're so friggin' hard to draw. Attitude is good, though 🙂

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                    • Coley
                      Coley @braden H last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett actually your horsie is doing a very good walk! After that is trot, canter, then gallop .....all different gaits! You did an awesome job. Sorry all us horsie people are getting all horsie on you LoL!🤣

                      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                      • BichonBistro
                        BichonBistro @Coley last edited by

                        @Coley Better Horse-ie than Horse-*it

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