Acorn Defender WIP

chrisaakins

@StudioLooong Well get on it, then! haha. We are all waiting to see your good work!

StudioLooong

Calling this one done! I'm not sure if I am completely satisfied with the color on the squirrel's face yet - I might go back in in a day or two and give it another try if it's still bothering me.

Amanda Jean

The chalk on the tree and the tree's trunk are perfect! I just love everything about this.

Neha Rawat

@StudioLooong hey this looks great! The concept is much clearer than the initial version. Also love the expressions! I do have 2 suggestions which you can try:

As suggested by coreyartus earlier, try desaturating the foreground elements (the squirrel and the bush), maybe to a similar shade.
I understand you’ve repositioned the squirrel to the bottom left corner to get the perspective, but the crop looks a little tight. Maybe if you have time you can draw the full squirrel, and show that it’s sitting on a tree branch. So it,l be a close up of the tree bark and branch which will be bordering the left side. Makes sense?

StudioLooong

I couldn't leave it alone - I went back in and made the squirrel a bit smaller and mocked in some text so that it can show as a two page spread.

TessaW

It's gorgeous! I love it.

MichaelaH

@StudioLooong It is wonderful and funny, I love how you made the "arghhh" really big

Coreyartus

OH, this turned out lovely!!! Well done!!! Congrats!!

Chip Valecek

@StudioLooong this is a really great piece. I love it.

Nyrryl Cadiz

@StudioLooong this is looking really great