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    October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :)

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    • Aaron_T
      Aaron_T last edited by

      Ha ha! Fun concepts but I really like the frankenpoodle version myself. Nice to see people going darker for October.

      https://www.instagram.com/aaron_t/

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        So... many... cables...

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        • braden H
          braden H @Aaron_T last edited by

          @Aaron_T said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

          frankenpoodle

          This is now canon 🙂

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          • TwiggyT
            TwiggyT last edited by

            The mad scientist girl and her frankendog look so happy that I just want to run with them. Be freeeeee!

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            • theprairiefox
              theprairiefox last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett both are looking good... can't wait to see the full inks. I like the value structure in the wire one thumbnail better. But I am not sure if you have built the value structure out as much for the other one.

              -The Prairie Fox
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              https://www.theprairiefox.com

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              • braden H
                braden H @TwiggyT last edited by

                @TwiggyT I don't know how I know how to run on two legs but it's so much fuuuuuuun!

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                • braden H
                  braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                  @theprairiefox Thanks! The value structure on the one with the crazy cabling is definitely better thought out. I'm not as worried about the first one since it's super simple. Characters on a simple background. I was more concerned with silhouette with that one 🙂

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                  • chrisaakins
                    chrisaakins last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett Oh no! I named my dog Fluffy, too. Great minds I guess.

                    Chris Akins
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                    • DarleneAnico
                      DarleneAnico last edited by

                      I'm actually quite a fan of your first concept and seeing the clean sketch I feel like it tells a clearer story.

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                      • Alesia Roosma
                        Alesia Roosma @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett they're both looking great!! But I have to ask on the first one, is that the top of Billy's head in the grave next to the bloody machete?? If so that is hilariously dark!

                        https://www.instagram.com/wild2wonder/

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @Chip Valecek last edited by

                          @Chip-Valecek said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

                          I could see a ton of blood and gore in that

                          Maybe just a LITTLE blood and gore 😉

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

                            @chrisaakins Fluffy is just the perfect name 🙂

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @DarleneAnico last edited by

                              @DarleneAnico I think I'm gonna explore both options since I don't have to colour them 🙂

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Alesia Roosma last edited by

                                @Alesia-Roosma said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

                                But I have to ask on the first one, is that the top of Billy's head in the grave next to the bloody machete??

                                It absolutely is 😃

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                                • Coley
                                  Coley last edited by

                                  these are awesome. I was wondering how to heck anyone could make this concept fun and you hit it out of the park !

                                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H last edited by

                                    @Coley All pictures with happy puppers are fun 🙂

                                    Clean sketch. Will ink soon.

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                                    • Coley
                                      Coley @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett what fun!

                                      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                      • MichaelaH
                                        MichaelaH @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett It is so fun illustration, amazing

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @Coley last edited by

                                          @Coley said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

                                          @Braden-Hallett what fun!

                                          WHEEEEEEEEEEE No one liked Billy anywaaaaaaaaaaay 😃 !!

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                                          • StudioLooong
                                            StudioLooong @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett lol so dark

                                            Taylor Woolley
                                            (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


                                            Website: www.woolleystories.com
                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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