October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :)

[DarleneAnico]

I'm actually quite a fan of your first concept and seeing the clean sketch I feel like it tells a clearer story.

[Alesia Roosma]

@Braden-Hallett they're both looking great!! But I have to ask on the first one, is that the top of Billy's head in the grave next to the bloody machete?? If so that is hilariously dark!

[braden H]

@Chip-Valecek said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :

I could see a ton of blood and gore in that

Maybe just a LITTLE blood and gore

[braden H]

@chrisaakins Fluffy is just the perfect name

[braden H]

@DarleneAnico I think I'm gonna explore both options since I don't have to colour them

[braden H]

@Alesia-Roosma said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :

But I have to ask on the first one, is that the top of Billy's head in the grave next to the bloody machete??

It absolutely is

[Coley]

these are awesome. I was wondering how to heck anyone could make this concept fun and you hit it out of the park !

[braden H]

@Coley All pictures with happy puppers are fun

Clean sketch. Will ink soon.

[Coley]

@Braden-Hallett what fun!

[MichaelaH]

@Braden-Hallett It is so fun illustration, amazing

[braden H]

@Coley said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :

@Braden-Hallett what fun!

WHEEEEEEEEEEE No one liked Billy anywaaaaaaaaaaay !!

[StudioLooong]

@Braden-Hallett lol so dark

[braden H]

@MichaelaH Thanks ! I think it's shaping up

Now I get to ruin it with ink!

[braden H]

@StudioLooong and yet so happy

[Coley]

@Braden-Hallett lol!

BTW, for a dark illustration, this is still pretty cute!!!!

[xin li]

@Braden-Hallett you are so right, all happy puppy pictures are fun to look at. haha, these two... their expressions are hilarious, alos love the angle you are using in the image. Great job.

One thing bugs me a bit with the design is Penny and the neighbor kid with puppy head are almost the same in size. Is there a better solution for this somehow?

[braden H]

@xin-li Interesting! Would you like to see more of a difference in size between the two? Like a smaller Penny and a larger frankenpooch?

[J L Martin]

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[xin li]

@Braden-Hallett yeah. Maybe smaller penny and a larger pooch will just do. I feel like this is a very dynamic scene, and I love the concept. But the choice of composition is a bit static: 2 equally sized characters, each ocuppy approximately half of the page. Hope this make sense.