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    October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :)

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    • MichaelaH
      MichaelaH @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett It is so fun illustration, amazing

      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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      • braden H
        braden H @Coley last edited by

        @Coley said in October contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

        @Braden-Hallett what fun!

        WHEEEEEEEEEEE No one liked Billy anywaaaaaaaaaaay 😃 !!

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        • StudioLooong
          StudioLooong @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett lol so dark

          Taylor Woolley
          (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


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          • braden H
            braden H @MichaelaH last edited by

            @MichaelaH Thanks 😃 ! I think it's shaping up 🙂

            Now I get to ruin it with ink!

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            • braden H
              braden H @StudioLooong last edited by

              @StudioLooong and yet so happy 🙂

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              • Coley
                Coley @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett lol!

                BTW, for a dark illustration, this is still pretty cute!!!!

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • xin li
                  xin li last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett you are so right, all happy puppy pictures are fun to look at. haha, these two... their expressions are hilarious, alos love the angle you are using in the image. Great job.

                  One thing bugs me a bit with the design is Penny and the neighbor kid with puppy head are almost the same in size. Is there a better solution for this somehow?

                  Web: www.lixin.no
                  IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @xin li last edited by

                    @xin-li Interesting! Would you like to see more of a difference in size between the two? Like a smaller Penny and a larger frankenpooch?

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
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                        • xin li
                          xin li @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett yeah. Maybe smaller penny and a larger pooch will just do. I feel like this is a very dynamic scene, and I love the concept. But the choice of composition is a bit static: 2 equally sized characters, each ocuppy approximately half of the page. Hope this make sense.

                          Web: www.lixin.no
                          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @xin li last edited by

                            @xin-li Absolutely makes sense 😃 I'll fiddle about with scale before inking. Thanks! I like the storytelling idea that the neighbour kid was not just a jerk, but older, too. Or maybe it's her older brother, lol 🙂

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Work progresses 🙂

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                              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett i just realised this but where did she get the human body? 😱😱😱😱

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                  @Nyrryl-Cadiz According to Penny 'any and all bodies, human or otherwise, become property of the owner of the domicile in which said body currently resides at time of death'.

                                  Billy DID come over to play, recently...

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                                  • Coley
                                    Coley @braden H last edited by

                                    @Braden-Hallett omg LoL. I laughed out loud. I also looked at the gravestone and grave in the BG which I hadn't before.. laughing out loud again snort snort🤣🤣![alt text](image url)

                                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett oh god... 😱😅

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @Coley last edited by

                                        @Coley I'm glad it's not too subtle, lol 🙂

                                        @Nyrryl-Cadiz It's all okay because Penny's got her pupper back 🙂

                                        And Billy was a total jerk!

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H last edited by

                                          Reinked Penny and the Pupper.

                                          Added the BG trees. Gave some value to the fence.

                                          Gonna fiddle with some clouds in the sky mebbe.

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                                          • xin li
                                            xin li @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett Great piece. You really nailed it again. Wow. Very interesting take on the topic. It took the third read to discover Billy's head by the grave. I first thought it was just dirt, or grass or something. Was it intensional?

                                            Web: www.lixin.no
                                            IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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