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    December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated :)

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

      @Braden-Hallett oh no! I thought you were already done. 😮 Go Braden!

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      • Coley
        Coley last edited by

        knocking it out of the park AGAIN Mr. @Braden-Hallett !!! so fun. in a very evil sort of way ha ha!!!

        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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        • braden H
          braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @Nyrryl-Cadiz said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

          oh no! I thought you were already done.

          Oh goodness no 🙂 Why take your time and not be stressed when you can wait until the very last two days?

          @Coley said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

          knocking it out of the park AGAIN

          Thanks 😃

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Everything's laid in. Time for some adjustment layers and the inclusion of hatching and other nice mark making 🙂

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            • Gustavo Ruiz
              Gustavo Ruiz @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett this made me chuckle! Very nice concept and execution! 👏

              Gustavo Ruiz
              Instagram: www.instagram.com/gustavo_ruizh
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              • Oriana Fernandez
                Oriana Fernandez @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett this so reminds me of the Tom and Jerry cartoon, Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Mouse (1947), only in this case, the mice are in charge of the poisonous concoction, and not the cat! Hehe! I like how you've handled the two planes, above and below, and even the contrast between the two. As always, your character expressions are priceless! Great composition!

                https://www.instagram.com/oriana_fernandez_/
                My blog: https://orianafernandez.wordpress.com/2018/05/16/28-twilight-stories-or-the-flight-of-the-wryter-and-the-weaver/

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Oriana Fernandez last edited by

                  @Oriana-Fernandez @Gustavo-Ruiz Thanks guys 🙂 I've gotta track down that Tom and Jerry cartoon!

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    Gonna put it away until tonight and then maybe make a few small tweaks. It's at the point where adding too much will ruin it. But I'm liking it as it is 🙂

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG @braden H last edited by demotlj

                      @Braden-Hallett Great as always. I particularly like the repetition of the rats' color in the person's face. It helps tie the two halves together. I don't know why you always say that you have difficulty with color because I think you do a great job with it!

                      Laurie DeMott
                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        Thanks for the feedback everyone 🙂

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                        • braden H
                          braden H @demotlj last edited by

                          @demotlj said in December contest WIP as is tradition. Feedback always appreciated 🙂:

                          I don't know why you always say that you have difficulty with color because I think you do a great job with it!

                          It's still a roll of the dice or the flip of a coin whether my colours will work out or not. I need better odds than that 🙂

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