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    December prompt WIP - Sad - Critiques welcome

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      • APHOTICMOTH
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        Giving up on this one for now. I rushed it again, but I'm tired of rushing art. I spent about an hour penciling this and it shows, so much heavy grain from quickly shading... Digitally fixed her face, and some light and dark values.

        Too much going on between holidays, family showing up, people showing up, other freelance work that is more important.

        I might go back and redo this in the future.

        sad girl svs.jpg

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          sad girl svs done.jpg

          Overlaid some color, and slapped the text back on. Going to submit even though Im not 100% happy with it. Would still be nice to possibly get some feedback on at least the composition, feel, etc. I actually think the monotone adds to the sadness a bit.

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