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    • BichonBistro
      BichonBistro @Coley last edited by

      @Coley I'd say you put your heart into this one ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      • KaraDaniel
        KaraDaniel last edited by

        So cute! I like the heart shaped footprints. perfect for Valentine's day right around the corner โ˜บ๏ธ

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        • Lobalyss
          Lobalyss last edited by

          Your illustration is so lovely and cute, I love it ๐Ÿ’ž

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          • Coley
            Coley @BichonBistro last edited by

            @BichonBistro lol!

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              thanks @KaraDaniel and @Lobalyss ๐Ÿ™‚

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              • Annaaronson
                Annaaronson last edited by

                This is so sweet. I love the work you put into it. I agree that itโ€™s prefect for Valentines Day! Well done!

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                • deborah Haagenson
                  deborah Haagenson last edited by

                  Very nice! I'm just not sure if you need the little white icesicles hanging down from the branches. I think they might be a little distracting.

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                  • Coley
                    Coley @deborah Haagenson last edited by

                    @deborah-Haagenson I was wondering that too. Gonna toy with removing them. Thanks โ˜บ๏ธ

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                    • Rachel Horne
                      Rachel Horne @Coley last edited by

                      @Coley this is super lovely!! I prefer the second image, I donโ€™t think you need the branches at the top. โ™ฅ๏ธ

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                      • Coley
                        Coley @Rachel Horne last edited by

                        @Rachel-Horne thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚ I'm playing around with keeping some of them or removing them etc etc lol. I appreciate the feedback thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ !

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                        • Coley
                          Coley last edited by

                          Some changes. Things are warmed up and flowers mostly removed and little twiggy alder sort of things poking through snow added. Background trees lowered. Realizing I need soft shadow under the characters. Going back and forth on branches or no branches! I like the depth they add but they're maybe a bit too angular? If anyone has thoughts on that let me know. And text or no text?
                          The one with branches doesn't have some of the changes yet eg warming up of colors etc
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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey last edited by

                            I like it but i dont know how i feel about a big sign with an arrow that says โ€œloveโ€ i think it would be more impactful as an illustration if it was telling me the same message without a sign.

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                            • BichonBistro
                              BichonBistro @Coley last edited by BichonBistro

                              @Coley I have favored the branches for framing Will and the girl, but when I add the text to the tree, that is no longer as much a factor, so maybe go without the branches?662DD420-29D7-46E0-AB2B-B67AE498C2A4.jpeg

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