Critique/suggestions: too loose? Not loose enough? Just right?
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@Annaaronson said in Critique/suggestions: too loose? Not loose enough? Just right?:
I love that you aren't resting on one thing and keep pushing forward
well when that 'one thing' doesn't get you much work, needs as must, lol. But thank you
@theprairiefox said in Critique/suggestions: too loose? Not loose enough? Just right?:
You might want to think about your "rules" for line work to emphasize focal points and portray depth
Don't worry. This was a sketchy sketch only
@Heather-Boyd said in Critique/suggestions: too loose? Not loose enough? Just right?:
I hope something of that was helpful,
Absolutely! Thank you!
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I love what you've done here. I would choose this book to read to my kids, very kid friendly. Curious have you illustrated children's books for publishers before? If not, I say the time is now! If so, tell me what book/s so I can buy it/them!
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@KaraDaniel that's good to hear! Thank you
I have not illustrated anything yet, no. -
-I think the line art is great, didn’t stand out to me in a bad way at all. I think maybe some colors could be added in the background to tie in the foreground and the background even though they are supposed to be separate I think it looks a bit too flat right. Not a huge issue but that would be the first thing I would focus on
-textures look great, not super obviously digitalAltogether a nice piece
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I like the changes you made to this on your website!
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@Griff Thanks for the feedback
@LauraA said in Critique/suggestions: too loose? Not loose enough? Just right?:
I like the changes you made to this on your website!
Thanks! I think it turned out pretty well.
