WIP take two (critique is appreciated)

sarahlash

@chrisaakins I LOVE the reddish glow! It really warms up the whole image.

@chrisaakins that was me, happy to be wrong about old timey haircuts Next time I will take note of it and be sure to check.

This happens a lot though with my own drawings - all these little questions I have to answer... it can kind of get overwhelming. Kind of fun, of course, but can turn into a long list of strange questions to research.

It looks so much better, btw. Hope you're feeling better by now, too. Is it still supposed to be raining outside when the monster is falling? it looks a little bit like he's is underwater without some slanting rain...

chrisaakins

@carolinedrawing Hahaha. It does. I need some slanting rain I guess. It could be flooding like it is here in GA right now.

APHOTICMOTH

Is it just me, or is the edge of the book cover creating a tangent with the edge of the candle?

I love all of the changes you've made to this piece. Huge improvement. I really love the red tinge. Very warm feeling. The colors are so nice. The harsh yellow was a bit odd, but it's very soft now.

I didn't critique because there was a lot that could have been worked on, and I didn't know how to phrase it without seeming mean. I never know how much is too much for a critique. I love all the critiques you received though, it's turned this into a really fun piece.

chrisaakins

@CLCanadyArts It does but I think I am not going to worry about it right now. Still recovering from the flu...