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    One more quick A or B and then I'll move on, I swear :)

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by braden H

      One more A or B or C (what a twist!) and then I'll leave it alone and move on πŸ™‚

      Your feedback is most appreciated πŸ˜ƒ I'd rather the pose read to everyone immediately as opposed to most or just some. Thanks in advance!

      Note, the third option should read 'try a different pose you pose-clingy pose clinger' but the poll does not appreciate length options, lol.

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      • Katie Kordesh
        Katie Kordesh last edited by

        A is an instant read for me!

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        • Coley
          Coley last edited by

          Your questions are too hard for me 😸 I can't decide. Maybe something in between? You're taking advice from a very tired person if you listen to me at the moment LoL. Maybe c then. B looks almost like the cat's head is turned around too far in not quite a normal manner? Part owl. But I'd like see more of his expression. So I'm going c.
          Sorry 😁
          Seriously tho that's being super nit picky because I know you can pull off anything!

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          • KathrynAdebayo
            KathrynAdebayo last edited by

            I agree with @Coley πŸ™‚ I love how excited the mouse is.

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            • Neha Rawat
              Neha Rawat last edited by

              A seems more believable but I googled the pose, and cats are very much capable of making B pose as well (well of course they would, they're practically fluid). I personally like showing the characters facial expression, so I would go with B.

              I think just a tiny change of showing the starting of the tail (where it joins the body) would make the pose more readable. Right now it's hidden behind the oval thing.

              Love the little mousey!

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett i love how I can see more of the Cat’s face in B

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Coley last edited by

                  @Coley said in One more quick A or B and then I'll move on, I swear πŸ™‚:

                  Seriously tho that's being super nit picky because I know you can pull off anything!

                  Nit picky is good! Thanks for weighing in πŸ˜ƒ

                  @Neha-Rawat said in One more quick A or B and then I'll move on, I swear πŸ™‚:

                  I think just a tiny change of showing the starting of the tail (where it joins the body) would make the pose more readable.

                  Good call! It used to be in plain view but got covered up.


                  Thanks everyone for the feedback! It is most appreciated πŸ™‚

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