March WIP: Everything’s broken - halp! 😂

[EliaMurrayArt]

@Griff said in March WIP: Everything’s broken - halp! :

@EliaMurrayArt I would also go with option A, the creature being darker works a bit better I think

What does your eye go to first? Here’s a darker creature. But I’m wondering if he’s too saturated now? I want the man to be the first look.

[Griffin McPherson]

@EliaMurrayArt I don’t mind the saturation but I do think the creature is too dark around the man and it makes it harder to see him

[EliaMurrayArt]

@Griff hmmmm agreed! I’ll work on that!

[chrisaakins]

@EliaMurrayArt I think if you saturate the man it will help. I also think that you need to add some shadows to the broken wall angles where you can see the cross sections. I really am liking this. Your gesture and expression is wonderful. I think if you had a couple of chunks of ceiling falling down and some dust clouds it will help with the "the monster just ripped off the ceiling" vibe.

[EliaMurrayArt]

@chrisaakins dust clouds, yes, I love it! I thought it felt too still and what you’re suggesting is spot on. Yes. I have tried adding shadows to the walls but it always felt weird. I’ll give it some more goes. Thank you!!

[EliaMurrayArt]

Does this look like rubble dust clouds..... ? Is this working?

[carlianne]

@EliaMurrayArt oh yeah the dust helps a lot!

[EliaMurrayArt]

@carlianne thank you!

[chrisaakins]

@EliaMurrayArt looks good!

[EliaMurrayArt]

@chrisaakins Thank you!! I am so glad you suggested it!