Quick Vote Please! 🌙 With or with out text?
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@TessaW i love the text one. It looks like the moon is a sparkler or something. I just find it more attractive
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@Braden-Hallett makes a good point that the text version looks like a book cover. If it's not a cover, I think I prefer the non-text version, because it seems more organic without the text. But I do like how the text-version has more starry streaks.
I love the little splish-splash the stars are making on the ground of the text version!
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Perhaps try a version without the text but has the same density/energy of the night fall text.
I agree with other posters that the version without text feels like it is missing something - but I think it's that the words give a great movement and create so much magic because their are bright and shiny. I bet it could still feel that without text but just with more shiny sparkly wonderfulness.
Beatiful piece!
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@TessaW I love it with text. It fits the piece so well.
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I prefer without but not sure why. I think maybe the text covers her legs a little too much so it removes the floating effect a little. But it still works. And I’ve already said it before but I love this , and I love it either way. It’s just very sweet and dreamy, and the character is
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Thank you so much for the feedback you guys!!! After reading all of your comments and seeing the poll results, I think I'll play around with both versions more. I added the moon sparks in the hour or so before the contest deadline, so a few more hours of playing around with it is in order I think.
Thanks again for your opinions and suggestions.
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I love it with the text just because I've seen it and I get biased towards any sort of typography that blends in so well will the illustration.
I'd just make the text brighter in some parts, as much as the moon.BEAUTIFUL illustration!
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I absolutely love both these images. I agree with others that the version with the writing would be an excellent book cover. If you were going to use the version without text I also agree with @baileymvidler that you could perhaps add a little more of the splashing stars she mentioned falling on the ground as that is such a beautiful effect. It’s a beautiful piece either way! Well done!
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@EliaMurrayArt agreed! I like the openness to interpretation of the one without text but enjoy the brighter more magic stars dropping in the one with text.
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It does look like that space below her needs something, but I'm not sure it has to be text. Or slightly thicker text, maybe cursive? Or am I just throwing a wrench into things?
I think you're right: Play around with the possibilities and you'll happen upon the solution!
