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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey last edited by

      Ok a slightly neater rough sketch of the kitchen

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      • Anna Lindsay
        Anna Lindsay last edited by

        It looks great so far! I love the concept!

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey last edited by

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Ok rough line sketch
            Gonna try that color method i just learned from the youtubes to see if i can make the characters pop
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            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey last edited by

              My first attempt at a color study.. gonna try another couple
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              • carlianne
                carlianne @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @ArtofAleksey if you wanted feedback It's easier to see the characters on the two on the right. 🙂

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @carlianne last edited by

                  @carlianne thanks i agree with you

                  And yes of course feedback is welcome.

                  Im already at the color study stage and it’s really fun

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                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    More color Study options
                    Although these came out kinda dark

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                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
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                      Lorna H last edited by

                      I really love the concept of this, really funny, but also your characters are fantastic. I love the cat’s nonchalant appearance in contrast to the girls outrage 😂I tended to prefer the blue backgrounds as seems to help the girl to stand out. Amazing work!

                      Lorna

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        Ok my last color study

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                          Ok ive narrowed it down to these 3
                          The second 2 her face looks a little too pink im gonna mess with that a tiny bit but everything else i like
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                          • Coley
                            Coley last edited by

                            Loving the colour studies !

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                            • marine
                              marine last edited by

                              @ArtofAleksey your concept and process is so great to watch, I'm learning a lot! (never done colour studies...)

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                              • ArtofAleksey
                                ArtofAleksey @marine last edited by

                                @marine oh awesome im glad that you’re learning from it. I’m actually learning as i go with this one too.

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                                • StudioLooong
                                  StudioLooong last edited by

                                  These are looking fantastic, I love your concept and that kitchen design is stellar, personally I'm drawn to the top color study but it may be because the other two don't have much color contrast? (I know these are just color studies and not value studies, just something to keep in mind)

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey @StudioLooong last edited by

                                    @StudioLooong great point thanks!

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                                    • Heather Boyd
                                      Heather Boyd @ArtofAleksey last edited by Heather Boyd

                                      @ArtofAleksey I find of these the first brown/red really helps pop your characters but find the last lighter blue one softer or easier to look at for my eyes (though the dog gets lost with a blue head). And from the 3 you've chosen the first and I agree with the mention of the value study. I have been doing value studies first then trying my colour studies.

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                                      • JoshSchouwstra
                                        JoshSchouwstra last edited by

                                        Cool concept! I like how well you designed the kitchen; keeping the focus on the characters, while making it look like most of the kitchen's I've been in: busy 🙂

                                        I noticed that the box for the Catbot just has the tagline for the product on it, and with most products having the product name in a prominent place on the packaging, maybe it would be good to add a name on there (Whiskers 3000, Catinator 251…etc) either above the tagline or in place of it. I mean, the image reads well enough that I could tell that the Catbot is supposed to get rid of the mice, so the tagline could even go away all together if you wanted.

                                        Looking forward to seeing where you go with the final colour!

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                                        • ArtofAleksey
                                          ArtofAleksey @JoshSchouwstra last edited by ArtofAleksey

                                          @JoshSchouwstra yeah I thought about that. But the cartoonist in me couldn’t resist. I’ll try it though because maybe it will be better than a tag line. I can practice my typography a bit

                                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
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                                          • xin li
                                            xin li last edited by

                                            @ArtofAleksey great concept. Love seeing your progress.
                                            I echo @StudioLooong regarding value. I think value is especially important with busy scene such as the one you are designing. Keep in mind a simple quesiton may help "is it a dark shape on a light background, or light shape on a dark background?" I would group all background in the same value zone, and simplify the rendering if I can. You could try to use more or less line work for the bakcground, and have a bit more rendering and details going on for the forground characters.

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