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    Tiger falling through the air!! (Feedback needed)

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @alisa last edited by

      @smileyflower 3 looks more natural for me.

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      • bradyblack
        bradyblack last edited by

        I agree, 1 or 3 has better reads to me and more interesting gesture

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        • alisa
          alisa @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thanks for your input on this, much appreciated!!:)

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          • alisa
            alisa @bradyblack last edited by

            @bradyblack Thank you for saying so!! I appreciate your help and feedback:)

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            • alisa
              alisa last edited by

              Thanks everyone!! ❤

              I tried to combine 1 and 3 in these further sketches. I'm personally leaning toward B as to me it looks more dimensionally consistent with the rest of my illustrations in this series, but I'm very keen to know what you think!

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              Example of finished illustration:

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              • demotlj
                demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                I like B although you might bring the back left leg out just a bit because it's lined up with the tiger's body and I didn't see it at first. You have a very appealing style.

                Laurie DeMott
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                • Aaron_T
                  Aaron_T last edited by

                  I think B looks like it has more weight but like @demotlj mentioned I think that back leg needs to be aligned a little differently to stand out. Love your style!

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                  • alisa
                    alisa @demotlj last edited by

                    @demotlj Thank you for pointing that out, I see what you mean and wouldn't have noticed otherwise! Your compliment made me smile! ❤

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                    • alisa
                      alisa @Aaron_T last edited by

                      @Aaron_T That's a very good point, I'll be sure to make those changes in the final. Thanks so much, I'm glad! ❤

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