Isolation WIP - therapeutic process

TessaW

This is such a lovely concept. I got goose bumps! Can't wait to see it progress.

KathrynAdebayo

@Miriam Hi Miriam, thanks so much for your advice. I took to heart what you said about making the two parts of the illustration seem cohesive, and I hope it’s working well, but please feel free to let me know what you think.

KathrynAdebayo

@chrisaakins Wow, thanks so much for your valuable advice. I tried to make the characters on the right stand out and more detailed, but the line work in the trees did end up getting really busy... hmm... Do you think it's too distracting? Thanks so much for the advice about making the larger picture compliment the smaller one. Now that I've worked on the zoomed out image for a while, I feel like I might need to go back into the smaller one and tighten things up a bit. Thanks again for taking the time to comment.

KathrynAdebayo

@TessaW

KathrynAdebayo

Here’s where it stands now...

@KathrynAdebayo It's really beautiful

KathrynAdebayo

Thanks to the good advice given here, I thinned some of the line work on the image on the left and added flames to the fire.

Any advice at this point?

KathrynAdebayo

Well, after a few days of letting this sit and making some minor changes... maybe it’s done? Any other feedback or suggestions that could improve the overall feel? Thanks for the help so far guys.

miranda-hoover

@KathrynAdebayo Wow! That looks beautiful! I love your use of colors! Also, I think the shooting star placed under "Never" has a nice effect.

smoke

@KathrynAdebayo on the left illustration I should put a fire on that campfire, the rest looks great on that one. And the one on the other side I should make the overall illustration a bit darker but the vocal point. Especially between the trees, thinking where the moonlight would come from so there could be some castingshadows. But
that's my thought on it. Hope you know what I meant about that. Overall, great idea, love the layout and your personal style.

smoke

@KathrynAdebayo this looks amazing, please forget my previous comment.