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    Which one? Masks prompt. Can't decide!

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    • Coley
      Coley last edited by Coley

      Can't decide which to keep. . also can't decide if I like it or not.
      🤣
      I like most of it by now actually. Getting here was tough LoL.
      Prompt was just"masks", scbwi, deadline is Monday, I found it really hard to get an idea, I ended up turning the masks into butterflies 🙂 not sure why or what the story is. I mainly wanted things to look like fun for kids.

      A and d are quite similar except for color of dress and a little more visibility on faded flowers in background.
      I think I'm leaning towards a because the flying masks show up better. I think.
      A
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      B
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      C
      received_3286472138071513.jpeg
      D
      received_284540512586756.jpeg

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        Mara Price @Coley last edited by

        @Coley I"A" the colors make me feel calm and at ease

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        • theprairiefox
          theprairiefox @Coley last edited by

          @Coley I like 'C' not sure why. Maybe the darker colors are contrasting with the dress better?

          -The Prairie Fox
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          • LauraA
            LauraA SVS OG last edited by

            I like B for color and C for contrast. How's that for confusing? I think the difference if that i like the warm/cool contrasts in B but the lighter flower and sleeves in C

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              Thanks @Mara-Price @theprairiefox @LauraA
              Feedback much appreciated!masks15.jpg

              I made the upper half lighter, the butterflies a little less opaque so they maybe feel a bit more part of the scene, dress slightly darker, soft highlights on hair and dress, lower half of background slightly darker so flower pops.
              I gotta move onto isolation prompt now 😁 butwill still take any Crits if anyone has any.

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              • LauraA
                LauraA SVS OG last edited by

                Squinting at it, it does read better now! Might want to darken the background up just enough to get that "watermark! flower pattern back, because it was nice. The more transparent butterflies are nice, too.

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                • Coley
                  Coley @LauraA last edited by

                  @LauraA said in Which one? Masks prompt. Can't decide!:

                  Squinting at it, it does read better now! Might want to darken the background up just enough to get that "watermark! flower pattern back, because it was nice. The more transparent butterflies are nice, too.

                  Thanks @LauraA for your input. I'll see if I can get that back. Rats, I forgot about it when I was working LoL. I transported it from procreate to Photoshop and then adjusted so it might not be so easy 😜

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