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    • Norman Morana
      Norman Morana @Coley last edited by

      @Coley I haven't seen Will's watercolor class but it sounds like you're talking about blend modes. Sorry if this is old hat. Thought I'd show a couple quick screenshots. That box that says "Normal" is where you can find blend modes and I just show what it looks like off, normal mode, and set to overlay. And when I am painting this, I have the watercolor texture on from the start.

      blendmode.jpg

      Onwards,

      Norman

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      • Norman Morana
        Norman Morana @frankiiij last edited by

        @dafoota @Jeremy-Ross Sorry to hear. I haven't checked if the stream is up on svs' site, but last I checked you could view it on their facebook page in full. Hope that helps!

        Onwards,

        Norman

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        instagram.com/norman_morana/

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          frankiiij @Jeremy Ross last edited by

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          • frankiiij
            frankiiij @Norman Morana last edited by

            @Norman-Morana thank you. I enjoy your piece and even more you tenacity to go back and bend it to your will. Great stuff!

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @Norman Morana last edited by

              Very helpful @Norman-Morana! Much appreciated!

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              • carlianne
                carlianne last edited by

                I love the extra storytelling of seeing the orange tree in the periscope!

                I don't mind it flipped as it leads me to the text and feels natural with reading left to right, but i thin either way is fine. Looks great!

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                • Coley
                  Coley @Norman Morana last edited by

                  @Norman-Morana that's what Lee does fir textures I think? Will does something else that is a lot more complicated lol. I'll probably stick with Lee's version 😂

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                  • Miriam
                    Miriam last edited by

                    Yes, nice job putting in the effort to take in the feedback & rework the illustration.

                    I'd like to see more evidence that the alligator is a machine. That was something that wasn't very clear--for sure--to me.

                    I really like your drawing style, color scheme, and textures!

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                    • Kevin Longueil
                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Norman Morana last edited by

                      @Norman-Morana Your original piece is so good. I do like it flipped too but it is also perfect the way it is to me. I don't mind the lantern on the other side of the the belly away from the little monkey - i feel like it works better compositionally over there and the textures you have going on around it in the original are awesome..also it seems to be illuminating the text to me. I remember Will and Lee really liking the piece.

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                      • Norman Morana
                        Norman Morana @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        Thank you! @Kevin-Longueil yeah this illustration is in kind of a tough place right now. Everything is subjective at this point and it’s difficult to know what to settle on, haha.

                        Onwards,

                        Norman

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                        instagram.com/norman_morana/

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