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    Wizard of Oz: Pick a thumbnail

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    • JoshSchouwstra
      JoshSchouwstra last edited by

      Hey Holley,
      #5 is my favourite since it has all of these different elements of the story, and the title makes a nice division of space.

      Also a tip that I've found when designing a cover: include space for the author's name in the thumbnails (it'll sneak up on you in the final design).

      Looking forward to the final piece!

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by

        They all look really good to me but I think #5 is one of the best. That's just taking a quick look over.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • Sasha Contreras
          Sasha Contreras @holleywilliamson last edited by

          @holleywilliamson I vote for number 5! I really like how you framed everyone under the title and incorporated the city above with the witch 🙂

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          • j.sienkowski
            j.sienkowski last edited by

            I vote for #5 because it incorporates the most elements of the story and I like that it has big, medium and small sized items.

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            • NessIllustration
              NessIllustration Pro last edited by

              I like 5 and 10 the most!

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              • Jacy13
                Jacy13 @holleywilliamson last edited by

                @holleywilliamson I like numbers 3 and 5 the most 🙂

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                • idid
                  idid last edited by

                  I like 10 most

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                  • TessaW
                    TessaW last edited by

                    I like 8, 5, and 3

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                    • sigross
                      sigross @holleywilliamson last edited by

                      @holleywilliamson I like no 10 the most. I have a problem with No 3. I think revealing what Oz looks like on the cover is a massive spoiler.

                      I'm just listening to the audible version with Anne Hathaway reading it to me - so good. And Oz being a mystery is such an important part of the story. BTW I've never watched the film or read the book before.

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                      • Aisleen
                        Aisleen last edited by

                        I like 3, 5 and 11 ... but looking at it again, I also kind of like number 9

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen says: I also like 3's compostion and 4 because she is riding a lion and I think that's pretty cool.

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • Kevin Longueil
                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @holleywilliamson last edited by

                            @holleywilliamson Very nice! i am liking 9 the best, it stands out as being unique - something i have not seen before for an Oz cover - they all look nice though!

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                            • djlambson
                              djlambson last edited by

                              I really like #5 as well but feel like its been done in that manner so many times..I vote for #3 for that reason. Its unique and adventurous and looks great as far as composition goes. Love them all.

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                              • holleywilliamson
                                holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                                Thanks for all the feedback so far, I usually don’t have a hard time picking a thumbnail, but for A I am worried that it is giving away too much story, also that they all look worried. For B I am worried that it is too generic, not different enough, but you can really see the character design. With C, their backs are shown, which is pretty popular with book covers but is that too easy of a solution? Also For C I was going to do their silhouettes, but then it doesn’t really go with the dark vs. light theme.

                                Let me know which one you like!

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                  B and C. Though with A I might make the characters a little smaller so thry don't go off the page. That might just be personal preference.

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                    @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Since my husband is sitting next to me I asked him. He chose 3. Not an artist, just a regular guy with an opinion 🙂

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • Neha Rawat
                                      Neha Rawat last edited by

                                      I like B and C. Leaning more towards C.

                                      Any reason they're all looking off to the right in B? Instead, I'd like to see some of the characters interacting with each other.

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                                      • cszoltan
                                        cszoltan last edited by

                                        Wow, this is a hard pick. I think nr. 1 and nr. 2 are the strongest. Nr. 3 is split in two by the rainbow, I think that kind of creates an imbalance in the image.
                                        In conclusion I think I would go with nr. 1, It is well balanced, the title is super clear, in your face with that strong contrast and also what is underneath fatefully encapsulates the story, and has everything that you need to know about OZ. So yeah Nr. 1.
                                        Cant wait to see your Update!

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                                        • holleywilliamson
                                          holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                                          Well this is what I ended up with. I wasn’t loving any one so figured it was time to do another idea. I really liked having the characters up close, but added more story. I am thinking of doing some additional black and white illustrations of some of the other thumbs that you guys liked that would be inside the book. Working on character continuity is something I have been working on. Thanks for the feedback!

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                                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @holleywilliamson last edited by

                                            @holleywilliamson This is looking really lovely! I love your colors and I love your characters' outfits, especially Dorothy and Scarecrow's.

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