Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    Contest judging for July - "representative of the story"

    Artwork
    11
    27
    1522
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • cszoltan
      cszoltan @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by cszoltan

      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Yup, I think you can go all the way with this one, it is an incredibly rich universe and there is a lot of fun to be had! I m just trying to see it from a client`s point of view, and also as a portfolio peace, if a potential art director sees my cover illustration, I dont want them to immediately think, that I have illustrated the Movie πŸ˜… not the book.

      C.S.Zoltan
      Portfolio: www.behance.net/cszoltan
      Instagram: www.instagram.com/c.s.zoltan

      Nyrryl  Cadiz 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @cszoltan last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

        @cszoltan Is it really that bad if you illustrated the movie tho? Art Directors are not that nit-picky. At least I think they're not. πŸ˜… Unless you deliberately state it, they'll never know this project was supposed to be based on the book and not the movie (which Jake did not specifically made clear btw). Art directors probably won't even ask you if you followed this illustration's prompt to a tee or if there was any specific prompt involved.

        Anyway, lot of movies are getting illustrated as children's books nowadays. Kim Smith did this and her books are best sellers. Art Directors might actually like it more to see you referencing the movie. Besides who among the young generation these days have read the book? They'll probably connect with the movie more.

        I guess my main point is that it's okay to reference the movie just as much as it's alright to reference the novel. As long as you have a new piece in your portfolio to show to your potential clients that's all that matters.

        download.jpg 911fpRoYCWL.jpg 91Tx14igO9L.jpg 91oB7xcPIlL.jpg

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

        cszoltan 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
        • carriecopadraws
          carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

          I think the judges for this contest will be selecting the most pleasing compositions for the critique, but I predict a discussion will come up about using iconic movie elements on the book cover. Will be curious to hear the their thoughts.

          Carrie Copa
          https://carriecopadraws.com/

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd

            @Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks for sharing Kim Smith's work -I especially like the karate kid.

            As for the topic in question, I support illustrating the book from it's text and being clear what version it is (there's more than one?) in good conscious. Because it's a book cover I would not draw from the movie, if the text says one eye but the cover shows two -for the witch I would have that nagging visual in my head for whole book. I would feel I would not do it justice (to the original author) if I chose to edit their original work. I remember this concern came up for me when we did the last book cover and someone chose to put characters on the cover that were not in the first book but in the second. I had reread the book and was puzzled I couldn't find the characters, but they were in the movie adaption.

            Anyways I am not taking part in this contest and read the write up for it -so there's some flexibility but since it's still a book cover, I'd keep to the book. If the text was the movie then by all means have the cover with the move additions. Yeah, good topic to get us thinking @Kevin-Longueil

            Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
            Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
            Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
            Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/heatherboydillustration

            Be blessed,

            Nyrryl  Cadiz 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

              @Heather-Boyd yeah, giving it much thought now, I think it should really just fall on the individual illustrators and what they want the prompt to be for themselves.

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
              • cszoltan
                cszoltan @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                @Nyrryl-Cadiz Wow these are some frickin` awesome covers! I totally agree on the fact the "kids now a days" do connect more with the movies, it is easier to consume. I need to look in to who made these illustrations, thank you for sharing!

                C.S.Zoltan
                Portfolio: www.behance.net/cszoltan
                Instagram: www.instagram.com/c.s.zoltan

                Nyrryl  Cadiz 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @cszoltan last edited by

                  @cszoltan Her name is Kim Smith. She's a Canadian illustrator. Here's her portfolio https://kimillustration.com/

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

                  cszoltan 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                  • carrieannebrown
                    carrieannebrown last edited by

                    Jake did specify the book by putting Frank Baum on the template. He also said an edition, rather than version so I think he means the same story but with say a new foreword or something.

                    My understanding is that he was trying to give us a prompt that was similar to what a real commission would be like, so sticking to the book means you've actually read it and are able to follow a brief. If I was commissioned to create a book cover, the first thing I'd do is read at least the first few chapters.

                    He's also chosen Wizard of Oz because the original story is out of copyright. The film isn't. It shows an art director that you can follow a brief but still be creative within those confines.

                    Having said that, if the aim is to create a great portfolio piece and it doesn't align with your aims, there's no reason you can't change the prompt slightly to create something that appeals to your market.

                    www.instagram.com/carrieannesdesigns/
                    www.carrieannebrown.co.uk

                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
                    • sigross
                      sigross @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                      @Kevin-Longueil It could be the cover for a yet to be released edition of the book. I bet transforming Wizard of Oz into a boss robot world would get Jake to put it into top 16. πŸ˜ƒ

                      www.grossiebazaar.com
                      www.sigross.com
                      www.instagram.com/sigross/

                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                      • cszoltan
                        cszoltan @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                        @Nyrryl-Cadiz Already did some digging, also found her books, thank you for sharing Nyrryl 😁

                        C.S.Zoltan
                        Portfolio: www.behance.net/cszoltan
                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/c.s.zoltan

                        Nyrryl  Cadiz 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @cszoltan last edited by

                          @cszoltan awesome! I’m glad you like her. πŸ˜€

                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

                          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                          • Coley
                            Coley @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                            @Kevin-Longueil does Dorothy have a blue dress in the book? Asking for a friend πŸ˜‚. I was thinking of using a different color than blue but wasn't sure.... I suppose artistic licence could prevail but I haven't read the book either 😜

                            https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

                            carriecopadraws ? Kevin Longueil carrieannebrown 4 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 0
                            • carriecopadraws
                              carriecopadraws SVS OG @Coley last edited by

                              @Coley Here's a description of Dorothy's outfit from Chapter 3 of the book (she changes into these clothes once she gets to Oz):

                              Dorothy had only one other dress, but that happened to be clean and was hanging on a peg beside her bed. It was gingham, with checks of white and blue; and although the blue was somewhat faded with many washings, it was still a pretty frock. The girl washed herself carefully, dressed herself in the clean gingham, and tied her pink sunbonnet on her head. She took a little basket and filled it with bread from the cupboard, laying a white cloth over the top. Then she looked down at her feet and noticed how old and worn her shoes were.

                              β€œThey surely will never do for a long journey, Toto,” she said. And Toto looked up into her face with his little black eyes and wagged his tail to show he knew what she meant.

                              At that moment Dorothy saw lying on the table the silver shoes that had belonged to the Witch of the East.

                              β€œI wonder if they will fit me,” she said to Toto. β€œThey would be just the thing to take a long walk in, for they could not wear out.”

                              She took off her old leather shoes and tried on the silver ones, which fitted her as well as if they had been made for her.

                              Finally she picked up her basket.

                              β€œCome along, Toto,” she said. β€œWe will go to the Emerald City and ask the Great Oz how to get back to Kansas again.”

                              Carrie Copa
                              https://carriecopadraws.com/

                              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
                              • ?
                                A Former User @Coley last edited by

                                @Coley Dorothy has a gingham dress, blue and white checked. The munchkins were very impressed because white meant she was a sorceress and they thought blue was very kind of her to wear because it was the favorite color of munchkinland. So it worked out well for her starting out her journey.

                                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                                • Coley
                                  Coley last edited by

                                  Thanks so much @carriecopadraws and @carolinebautista πŸ™‚

                                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

                                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                  • Kevin Longueil
                                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Coley last edited by

                                    @Coley Blue and white gingham is it - Looks like @carriecopadraws has it covered! the only thing i might add it that she lived in a one room house - this might be important to folks that were showing Dorothy's house in the illustration.

                                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

                                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                                    • carrieannebrown
                                      carrieannebrown @Coley last edited by

                                      @Coley she does change into a green dress in Emerald City which turns out to be white when she leaves. But most of it she's wearing the blue and white gingham farmer girl dress

                                      www.instagram.com/carrieannesdesigns/
                                      www.carrieannebrown.co.uk

                                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                                      • Coley
                                        Coley last edited by

                                        Thanks @carrieannebrown and @Kevin-Longueil πŸ™‚

                                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

                                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                                        • First post
                                          Last post