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    Howl's Moving Castle - Book Cover WIP

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    • TessaW
      TessaW last edited by

      These are such cool thumbnails. I like 1 and 3. At first I was slightly drawn more to 1 because of it's epicness, but I think as is, I could envision 3 more on book shelves in libraries and in stores. I think you are hitting your keywords and you could even say that option 1 also conveys "traveler" and option 3 also conveys "quirky".

      I don't think the text is incorporated as well into 1 as it is in 3. I think having the text be so large, dark, and in a block shape right in between Sophie and the castle diminishes the impact of the view Sophie is experiencing.

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      • carriecopadraws
        carriecopadraws SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

        @TessaW Would #1 be better as a full-page interior illustration instead than a book cover? I do like the epicness of it, and without text you'd get the full effect of the castle in the fog.

        howl sketches opt1-interior.jpg

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        • NessIllustration
          NessIllustration Pro @carriecopadraws last edited by

          @carriecopadraws I love 3! Yes I think 1 would work better as an inside illustration.

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          • djlambson
            djlambson last edited by

            I love 3 as well..my focus is on the castle rather than the typeface. It's very exciting, even in black and white!

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            • korilynneillo
              korilynneillo @carriecopadraws last edited by

              @carriecopadraws I've been so excited to see what you do with this! I really like #3 - I agree with everyone that #1 would make a fantastic interior!

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              • Chris Perry 0
                Chris Perry 0 last edited by

                I like the comp of 2 but the castle on 3. Good job!

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @carriecopadraws last edited by

                  @carriecopadraws they all look so good!

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                  • K.Flagg
                    K.Flagg @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @Nyrryl-Cadiz I think #3 just has such an easy read to it. I do like the composition in one so I like the idea of an interior for that one. That was a great idea.

                    K.Flagg

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                    • J
                      Joanne Roberts last edited by Joanne Roberts

                      #1 is very good: clear and appropriate, but I feel like I've seen it before. Besides, #3 is fantastic. a great silhouette and clean design! Hope that helps

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                      • carriecopadraws
                        carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

                        Thanks everyone! #3 seems like the clear choice, with #1 as an interior illustration. I'm excited to go forward on this!

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                        • Laurel Aylesworth
                          Laurel Aylesworth @carriecopadraws last edited by Laurel Aylesworth

                          @carriecopadraws I think this is a great choice for the cover. You don't have to take this suggestion, but I'm wondering if the clouds/negative space could be an opportunity to be a second read (maybe it's a profile of one of the characters?). Either way, this is looking good. Edited: whoops. You're going with #3 -- my comments were regarding option #1.

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                          • VeronicaMui
                            VeronicaMui last edited by

                            Loving this, looking forward to seeing it in color

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                            • Jade Vaughan
                              Jade Vaughan last edited by

                              @carriecopadraws Ooh! Exciting to see your progress on HMC. Makes me want to pick up a pen and start now too though I’m only halfway through the book (finally got it!).

                              I agree that #3 is the best cover design and the first would make a lovely interior art piece.

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