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    WIP July Book Cover - Help me choose!

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    • mag
      mag Pro SVS OG @carriecopadraws last edited by

      @carriecopadraws
      I really like opt. #1 and #3 - maybe #3 would be my favourite.
      One note from a publishing background (I had a job in pub. company working with licensed artwork such as Disney etc for some time) - I kinda would like to see Dorothy's face. From the marketing point of view, if there's an eye contact possible between the viewer and the main character on the cover, the potential buyer is more inclined to keep looking at the cover and thinking about buying that item - faces can catch our attention.
      But maybe it would not work for this kind of a concept - so take it just as an idea to think about. ๐Ÿ™‚

      Mag
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      • frankiiij
        frankiiij @carriecopadraws last edited by

        @carriecopadraws These are all so fun! Great job!

        Much love and God bless!

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        • Coley
          Coley last edited by

          Those three are all really great. I love the one with Dorothy mixed I n the with the villagers, very different and she feels planted right in the scene. But number 3 is so awesome too, an iconic moment and the composition with the monkeys flying down pulling all the attention to her is awesome.

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          • Griffin McPherson
            Griffin McPherson last edited by

            3 is definitely my favorite. Feels very exciting. The 2nd one doesnโ€™t quite speak "wizard of oz" to me, I think it would need more identifying pieces to the story. The first one is good too but I get most excited thinking about the completed cover for the 3rd. Canโ€™t wait to see where this goes!

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            • carriecopadraws
              carriecopadraws SVS OG @mag last edited by

              @mag I appreciate the insight and totally agree a face on the cover can attract the viewer! But I think I might risk making #3 anyway, there are some successful designs without using eye contact from the cover character (usually an adventure book where the character is facing another danger). Maybe I can make mine work too.

              book-covers-look-away.jpg

              Carrie Copa
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              • idid
                idid last edited by

                For whatever reason, I love 10 most. and if you can combine #3 and #10, that would look fantastic! In option #2 of your more detailed mock up cover, Dorothy looks great, but other people seems like a bit random and strange to her, so using pathway in #10 as visual guideline can help.

                My second favorite is #4, as it has a sense of simplicity/being minimal. This could be a personal preference though ๐Ÿ™‚

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                • Laurasketches
                  Laurasketches last edited by

                  If I look at your influences--then I think Option#3 will be most satisfying. But, great work! My personal fav is Option #2..but that is because it would be fun to do the character design of all those figures. Looking great!!

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                  • j.sienkowski
                    j.sienkowski last edited by

                    @carriecopadraws you are killing it! I love the text treatment from #1, but I think #3 is more exciting and "feels" more like the tone of the book. I would love to see the other characters incorporated into #3...I'm not sure how.? Maybe silhouetted in the foreground or in the distance looking back towards Dorothy? I love the use of non-movie elements too!

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                    • carriecopadraws
                      carriecopadraws SVS OG @j.sienkowski last edited by

                      @j-sienkowski Thanks! I was thinking the cover would wrap around and the other characters would be looking toward her from the back cover. I might mock that up too.

                      Carrie Copa
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                      • carriecopadraws
                        carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

                        UPDATE: COLOR STUDIES!

                        @mag though I did make a thumbnail with Dorothy facing the viewer and didn't care for it (#8 in the top post) because she looked oblivious to the danger, I tried it again in the color studies, and you were right - the cover is better with her facing the audience. Thank you for your feedback on that!

                        front-vs-back.jpg

                        So here are my color studies, does anyone have a clear favorite? I'm still working on the monkey placement and Totos' pose, but this is mostly to check colors.

                        oz-color-studies-svs.jpg

                        Carrie Copa
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                        • Jacy13
                          Jacy13 @carriecopadraws last edited by

                          @carriecopadraws My favorite is number 4 ๐Ÿ™‚

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                            Shyam Sailus @carriecopadraws last edited by

                            @carriecopadraws Number 3

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                            • Kevin Longueil
                              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @carriecopadraws last edited by

                              @carriecopadraws Wow! These are awesome! This is great moment from the book too. Number 4 stands out to me but number 1 is a close second. Very nice!

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                              • JessicaStauffer
                                JessicaStauffer last edited by

                                Wow I'm super impressed with all of the thumbnails and color schemes! Number 2 catches my eye. I like all the color in it! I like 4's colors as well.

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                                • carrieannebrown
                                  carrieannebrown @carriecopadraws last edited by carrieannebrown

                                  @carriecopadraws I would go for 4, the purple and green with a yellow/gold road and cap. Gorgeous design. I would try making the words wonderful, wizard and oz into one column of the same width and make 'the' and 'of' smaller and move to the sides, or of could go next to the O of Oz in the top left space.

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @carriecopadraws last edited by

                                    @carriecopadraws it's so hard to choose! ๐Ÿ˜…

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                                    • baileyvidler
                                      baileyvidler last edited by

                                      These are so good! I think my favorite is 1 (because it has the strongest contrast between monkeys and bg), but... I like how 2 has a "greener" background since green is obvs an important color in the story. That being said, Oz is a very whimsical setting, so you definitely could swing with the more saturated colors on this one.

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