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    July Prompt - Silver shoes -Tiny bit of color..any thoughts?

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    • mag
      mag Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

      @Kevin-Longueil I totally love it!
      Btw, if you’ll be sending the mock-up version, get rid of the bleed marks on your design (well, rather “cut” the design along the bleed marks and with that cropped image create the mock-up, but you probably know that.) 😉

      Mag
      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
      http://mag.takac.name

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      • Kevin Longueil
        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @mag last edited by

        @mag Thank you! I won’t send the mock up in....I just posted it this way because i thought it was kinda fun to see it looking like a real book - thank you for the feedback!

        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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        • Jeremy Ross
          Jeremy Ross @Kevin Longueil last edited by

          Makes me want to do a mock up for my cover @Kevin-Longueil!

          https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
          https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
          https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
          https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            It looks really cool!

            @Jeremy-Ross You should!

            Website: www.tessawrathall.com

            Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              Super awesome. Just gorgeous. Totally pro. You figured the yellow out!

              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                @Kevin-Longueil beautiful!!!

                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • Eric Droke
                  Eric Droke last edited by

                  You CRUSHED it! Love the limited use of color. But my favorite part is the reflection in the shoes! Genius! Way to go!

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                    @Kevin-Longueil My last suggestion is maybe lose the grid lines?

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                    • Kevin Longueil
                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                      @Jeremy-Ross Here is the image i used Jeremy....fairly low res. but still fun

                      4c3e94f0e3e41640a191f7f88c36499c.jpg

                      @TessaW Thank you Tessa!
                      @Coley Wow! thank you Coley!
                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you so much Nyrryl! I will remove the grid lines when i post it on the contest thread for sure - thank you again
                      @Eric-Droke Thank you Eric!

                      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                      • Jeremy Ross
                        Jeremy Ross @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        Thanks @Kevin-Longueil

                        https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                        https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                        https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                        https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                        • Griffin McPherson
                          Griffin McPherson last edited by

                          I would go with the yellow for sure. Particularly considering that it’s meant to be a book cover I think there should be some color to grab the eye. Love the reflection in the shoes by the way!

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                          • Jeremy Ross
                            Jeremy Ross @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                            Tried my hand with the mockup @Kevin-Longueil, Definitely had fun trying this; Here it is!
                            https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/9866/wizard-of-oz-book-cover-mockup

                            https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                            https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                            https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                            https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                            • Kevin Longueil
                              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Griffin McPherson last edited by

                              @Griff Thank you for the feedback Griff!

                              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                              • Kevin Longueil
                                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                @Nyrryl-Cadiz now I’m wondering if I should leave the grid lines in when I post it to show what is and is not in the bleed zone...?

                                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                • mag
                                  mag Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                  @Kevin-Longueil I was wondering the same, even thinking about posting two images side by side one with bleed, one without... but decided to just go with the grid lines, so it’s clear I’m counting with the bleed and they can be sure where everything is placed within the “actual” clean format of the cover... but I don’t like having them there either. 🤔

                                  Mag
                                  https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                  http://mag.takac.name

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                                  • Kevin Longueil
                                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @mag last edited by

                                    @mag Thank you for your thoughts Mag.. i'm thinking i'll post with the grid lines too then 🙂

                                    Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                    • Kim Hunter
                                      Kim Hunter last edited by

                                      Very cool!

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                                      • Kevin Longueil
                                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Kim Hunter last edited by

                                        @Kim-Hunter Thank you Kim!

                                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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