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    August Prompt Concept! feedback

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    • fpichel
      fpichel @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

      @MyArt-Multiverse Cool concept I think you should keep going, build them all out. Micro-feedback: I'd like the wings to be longer, to me these seem too short to provide enough lift + more dragon fly like if longer. ??? 🙂 rock on.

      http://easternlit.com https://www.instagram.com/fpichel/

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      • akpcreates
        akpcreates last edited by

        This is a cool idea. With the striped arms, tall boots, and helmet style, it actually reminded me of some character designs from the super stylish Sega video game series, Jet Set Radio (esp. the character Gum). I mean that in the coolest way ... the games are about punk kids who rollerblade around town and graffiti walls and avoid police. The whole game looks like a graffiti mural.

        IG: https://www.instagram.com/akpcreates/

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        • MyArt Multiverse
          MyArt Multiverse @Neha Rawat last edited by

          @Neha-Rawat thank you so much! I have a really tough time with environments so im not sure how I'm going to go about doing that.

          Stephanie
          https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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          • MyArt Multiverse
            MyArt Multiverse @Coley last edited by

            @Coley no it was a specific toy/show called Dragon Flyz lol

            Stephanie
            https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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            • MyArt Multiverse
              MyArt Multiverse @JoshuaDages last edited by

              @JoshuaDages thank you! I really appreciate that! A comic would be cool!...I've always had trouble drawing the same thing more than once though and I need a lot more practice with environments lol

              Stephanie
              https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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              • MyArt Multiverse
                MyArt Multiverse @fpichel last edited by

                @fpichel thank you for the feedback, the wings are giving me a lot of trouble so im def. Trying to work on them.

                Stephanie
                https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                • MyArt Multiverse
                  MyArt Multiverse @akpcreates last edited by

                  @akpcreates omg thank you! I LOVE THAT GAME!!! Lol 😆

                  Stephanie
                  https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                  • MyArt Multiverse
                    MyArt Multiverse last edited by MyArt Multiverse

                    Here is an update of my Idea, I am having a lot of trouble getting the perspective on the wings right on the left side, I'm also not the best with lighting. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome, thank you!
                    Fire_Fli.jpg

                    Stephanie
                    https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                    • Gabby Correia
                      Gabby Correia @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

                      @MyArt-Multiverse Love them!

                      https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                      • ina
                        ina last edited by

                        These are really fun designs! I wouldn't worry about your fiancé's comments, after all, pretty much everything has already been drawn! But not in your voice. 🙂 Which is completely different from those toys.

                        I'm sure you'll get good pointers from the others, but one thing that bothers me a little is where her left hand is supposed to be. It could be on the floor, perfectly aligned with the lower leg, but it could also be by her crotch or missing altogether. Great start though, I think they're going to look awesome!

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                        • MyArt Multiverse
                          MyArt Multiverse @ina last edited by

                          @ina yea that was bothering me too lol, the reference I used has it not showing so prob. Perfectly aligned with the leg, although I'm more worried about wing placement and lighting.

                          Stephanie
                          https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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