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    • Coley
      Coley last edited by

      I wonder if your fiancé meant a sort of general way it reminded him of a shows in that era, not a specific show ?

      These are very appealing ! 😊

      https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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      • JoshuaDages
        JoshuaDages last edited by

        These are awesome! I hadn't even considered superhero/human characters for this challenge. So creative! I remember the Sky Dancer commercials and stuff, and that didn't come to mind when I saw it either. I actually thought it would be a cool comic book. And I agree with @Lovsey, there's plenty of room for fantasy creatures. Can't wait to see the final!

        Joshua Dages
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        • fpichel
          fpichel @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

          @MyArt-Multiverse Cool concept I think you should keep going, build them all out. Micro-feedback: I'd like the wings to be longer, to me these seem too short to provide enough lift + more dragon fly like if longer. ??? 🙂 rock on.

          http://easternlit.com https://www.instagram.com/fpichel/

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          • akpcreates
            akpcreates last edited by

            This is a cool idea. With the striped arms, tall boots, and helmet style, it actually reminded me of some character designs from the super stylish Sega video game series, Jet Set Radio (esp. the character Gum). I mean that in the coolest way ... the games are about punk kids who rollerblade around town and graffiti walls and avoid police. The whole game looks like a graffiti mural.

            IG: https://www.instagram.com/akpcreates/

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            • MyArt Multiverse
              MyArt Multiverse @Neha Rawat last edited by

              @Neha-Rawat thank you so much! I have a really tough time with environments so im not sure how I'm going to go about doing that.

              Stephanie
              https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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              • MyArt Multiverse
                MyArt Multiverse @Coley last edited by

                @Coley no it was a specific toy/show called Dragon Flyz lol

                Stephanie
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                • MyArt Multiverse
                  MyArt Multiverse @JoshuaDages last edited by

                  @JoshuaDages thank you! I really appreciate that! A comic would be cool!...I've always had trouble drawing the same thing more than once though and I need a lot more practice with environments lol

                  Stephanie
                  https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                  • MyArt Multiverse
                    MyArt Multiverse @fpichel last edited by

                    @fpichel thank you for the feedback, the wings are giving me a lot of trouble so im def. Trying to work on them.

                    Stephanie
                    https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                    • MyArt Multiverse
                      MyArt Multiverse @akpcreates last edited by

                      @akpcreates omg thank you! I LOVE THAT GAME!!! Lol 😆

                      Stephanie
                      https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                      • MyArt Multiverse
                        MyArt Multiverse last edited by MyArt Multiverse

                        Here is an update of my Idea, I am having a lot of trouble getting the perspective on the wings right on the left side, I'm also not the best with lighting. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome, thank you!
                        Fire_Fli.jpg

                        Stephanie
                        https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                        • Gabby Correia
                          Gabby Correia @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

                          @MyArt-Multiverse Love them!

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                          • ina
                            ina last edited by

                            These are really fun designs! I wouldn't worry about your fiancé's comments, after all, pretty much everything has already been drawn! But not in your voice. 🙂 Which is completely different from those toys.

                            I'm sure you'll get good pointers from the others, but one thing that bothers me a little is where her left hand is supposed to be. It could be on the floor, perfectly aligned with the lower leg, but it could also be by her crotch or missing altogether. Great start though, I think they're going to look awesome!

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                            • MyArt Multiverse
                              MyArt Multiverse @ina last edited by

                              @ina yea that was bothering me too lol, the reference I used has it not showing so prob. Perfectly aligned with the leg, although I'm more worried about wing placement and lighting.

                              Stephanie
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