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    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator last edited by

      I'm finally done!! ...Well, I'm calling it at least. Finished not perfect, right?
      My vehicle design final. It took me so long because I've been practicing my digital skills at the same time. I not only wanted a vehicle design image, but a full illustration that I could use in my portfolio. I'm content. 🙂

      YardCar lr.jpg

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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      • TessaW
        TessaW @burvantill last edited by

        @burvantill This deserves some applause! 👏🏽 👏🏽 👏🏽 It's such a dreamy magical atmosphere with such a fun scenario!

        Website: www.tessawrathall.com

        Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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        • burvantill
          burvantill Moderator @TessaW last edited by

          @TessaW Thankyou very much. 😊

          Lisa Burvant
          www.lisaburvant.com
          Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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          • shanehunt
            shanehunt @Joe King last edited by

            @Joe-King I really like it, Joe! Great idea and solid execution. I think you just need to tighten up your perspective accuracy with things like the front curve of the ship and the engines. Nice job.

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            • shanehunt
              shanehunt @Jeremy Ross last edited by

              @Jeremy-Ross Hey Jeremy, sorry I haven't responded sooner. I wasn't getting notifications that I was getting tagged! I love your work ethic and all the designs you're pushing through. I'd love to see some of these without color, though. The colors and shading are a bit distracting from the designs. The other comment I'd make is that your line weights are all kinda uniform. Consider varying up your line weights to define the most important shapes and then stuff like the little polygon defining lines on this car could be much thinner and maybe even vanishing occasionally.

              Great work!

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              • shanehunt
                shanehunt @burvantill last edited by

                @burvantill Really solid work. Loving your use of contrast to emphasize your focal point. I do wish the car wasn't getting quite so lost in the composition. Nice job.

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                • burvantill
                  burvantill Moderator @shanehunt last edited by

                  @shanehunt Thank you! Even though this was my vehicle design final I wanted the vehicle to be more of a backdrop to the story. I still had a blast doing it though. Thank you for the good direction throughout. 🙂

                  Lisa Burvant
                  www.lisaburvant.com
                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                  • Jeremy Ross
                    Jeremy Ross @shanehunt last edited by

                    Hi @shanehunt, thank you so much for the feedback and tips! Will definitely work on improving line weight.

                    https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                    https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                    https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                    https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                    • jsnzart
                      jsnzart last edited by

                      I am really enjoying this course, and assignments.
                      Thanks @shanehunt

                      Made my own thread, but it feels kinda lonely😯

                      You guys and gals are doing great!

                      Assignment 1.
                      JKF-effectivevehiclesAss1.png

                      https://jsn.artstation.com
                      https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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                      • shanehunt
                        shanehunt @jsnzart last edited by

                        @jsnzart Hey, these are looking great! Loving the dynamic proportion variations.

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                        • ambiirae
                          ambiirae last edited by

                          Wow Just looking through these you guys have done some amazing work! I love seeing all the variations of the vehicles and the different interpretations. Cant wait to take this course looks like a lot of fun.

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                          • jsnzart
                            jsnzart @shanehunt last edited by

                            @shanehunt Thank you.

                            https://jsn.artstation.com
                            https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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                            • jsnzart
                              jsnzart last edited by

                              Assignment 2.
                              I should have put more thought into it from the beginning.
                              The Flintstones is too challenging!
                              Simple, but, too simple!
                              Just rock and wood.

                              Anyway, I understand form and function.
                              JKF-EffectiveVehicleDes_Ass2.png

                              1. Fred's new ride is a pickup truck, for the main purpose of shopping for Rex Ribs, etc.
                              2. A tank.
                              3. A wheelchair.
                              4. A square block of rock, on wheels.

                              https://jsn.artstation.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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