Vehicle Design course

shanehunt

@Joe-King I really like it, Joe! Great idea and solid execution. I think you just need to tighten up your perspective accuracy with things like the front curve of the ship and the engines. Nice job.

shanehunt

@Jeremy-Ross Hey Jeremy, sorry I haven't responded sooner. I wasn't getting notifications that I was getting tagged! I love your work ethic and all the designs you're pushing through. I'd love to see some of these without color, though. The colors and shading are a bit distracting from the designs. The other comment I'd make is that your line weights are all kinda uniform. Consider varying up your line weights to define the most important shapes and then stuff like the little polygon defining lines on this car could be much thinner and maybe even vanishing occasionally.

Great work!

shanehunt

@burvantill Really solid work. Loving your use of contrast to emphasize your focal point. I do wish the car wasn't getting quite so lost in the composition. Nice job.

burvantill

@shanehunt Thank you! Even though this was my vehicle design final I wanted the vehicle to be more of a backdrop to the story. I still had a blast doing it though. Thank you for the good direction throughout.

Jeremy Ross

Hi @shanehunt, thank you so much for the feedback and tips! Will definitely work on improving line weight.

jsnzart

I am really enjoying this course, and assignments.
Thanks @shanehunt

Made my own thread, but it feels kinda lonely

You guys and gals are doing great!

Assignment 1.

shanehunt

@jsnzart Hey, these are looking great! Loving the dynamic proportion variations.

ambiirae

Wow Just looking through these you guys have done some amazing work! I love seeing all the variations of the vehicles and the different interpretations. Cant wait to take this course looks like a lot of fun.

jsnzart

@shanehunt Thank you.

jsnzart

Assignment 2.
I should have put more thought into it from the beginning.
The Flintstones is too challenging!
Simple, but, too simple!
Just rock and wood.

Anyway, I understand form and function.

Fred's new ride is a pickup truck, for the main purpose of shopping for Rex Ribs, etc.
A tank.
A wheelchair.
A square block of rock, on wheels.