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    Ye Ye the Yeti and his home... contest WIP

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    • Neha Rawat
      Neha Rawat last edited by

      @mag This is so cute! I love the cute yeti family!

      I just checked out your website. You've done some amazingly adorable books! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

      https://www.nrbstudio.in/
      https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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      • mag
        mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Re: @Elliot @Joe-Hanson-Tannous @Neha-Rawat @NessIllustration thank you all so much. Itโ€™s always such a great fun creating a new character, but It also usually takes me ages... any advice on how to know when a character is โ€œfinishedโ€? ๐Ÿค”
        My progress with the little yetti so far: 4AE90E7E-D0B5-42A5-B4E4-FE50FDD8DEBE.jpeg

        Mag
        https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
        http://mag.takac.name

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @mag last edited by

          @mag very cute ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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          • Elena Comte
            Elena Comte @mag last edited by

            @mag Love your sketches. Really inspiring!

            Portfolio : https://www.elenacomtestudio.com/portfolio
            Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/elenacomtestudio/

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            • D
              doro_thea last edited by

              super nice. I really like the concept!

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              • Drawboy77
                Drawboy77 last edited by

                Love these designs and your story concept.

                Billy Phillips
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                • Rekha Salin 0
                  Rekha Salin 0 @mag last edited by

                  @mag such a lovely idea and that kid is just sooo cute .. just stands out ๐Ÿ˜

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                  • miranda-hoover
                    miranda-hoover @mag last edited by

                    @mag So cute ๐Ÿ˜ Your poses are really expressive!

                    https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                    • Meg Clayburn
                      Meg Clayburn @mag last edited by

                      @mag for me the best way to decide if a character is done is if you can draw him consistently, but he's still interesting. You know you've gone too far when they're too complex to draw accurately. You've also know you haven't gone far enough when you don't see personality of the character. That's all just my opinion.

                      I think you're heading in the right direction. In my opinion the little kid looks done, maybe just needs some distinguishing features when you decide the gender. Some of the sketches feel like a little girl, some like a little boy. The design feels very Hild tv show to me.

                      The Yeti has kind of a Totoro feel to him. He's very cute, but I feel like needs a little more something. Like one personality trait that's louder than the rest? Like he's a joker, or clumsy, or grumpy, or primitive etc. But I think just one...? Love the design though. I especially like that his horns are branches! And I like the fur pattern a lot.

                      Once again all my nit picky opinion, overall I really love the design work.

                      Meg Clayburn

                      Instagram.com/meg_clayburn

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                      • MichaelaH
                        MichaelaH @mag last edited by

                        @mag It is awesome, love the yeti character, it is innovative and has a "real" character...I love the cute face and it has really your style, so when I saw it on IG inmidiatly I knew, this is from Mag. I love the little kid, at that age all kids look like male and female so don't let it bother you if somebody says so. I love the kid, cute posture and I think girl or boy would love to read story about this little kid with his/her friends.

                        https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                        https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                        • mag
                          mag Pro SVS OG @Meg Clayburn last edited by

                          @Meg-Clayburn thanks so much for your input. It helped me a lot! ๐Ÿ™‚

                          Mag
                          https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                          http://mag.takac.name

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                          • mag
                            mag Pro SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

                            @MichaelaH thank you! Itโ€™s sometimes hard for me to decide if the kid should be girl or boy, when the story suits for both... in this case I think Iโ€™ll give it a time and decide once Iโ€™ll have more โ€œstory materialโ€ to work with. ๐Ÿ™‚

                            Mag
                            https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                            http://mag.takac.name

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                            • mag
                              mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              Thank you all for your kind support. Iโ€™m sharing some of the progress pictures. It was a great challenge and every one did a great job!6920AA47-79DD-4ECC-9724-BB5E94BB88FF.jpeg AA55F427-32E5-4CBB-A637-9434DD0ADD17.jpeg 7A31EB46-4D76-465D-AC99-8ACE30A06011.jpeg

                              Mag
                              https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                              http://mag.takac.name

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                              • aska
                                aska last edited by

                                Such a great story and designs!

                                Aska
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                                • aska
                                  aska @aska last edited by

                                  @aska reminds me of Totoro ๐Ÿ™‚

                                  Aska
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                                  • Meg Clayburn
                                    Meg Clayburn @mag last edited by

                                    @mag glad it helped! It turned out AWESOME! I love it so much!

                                    Meg Clayburn

                                    Instagram.com/meg_clayburn

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                                    • Kim Rosenlof
                                      Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                                      These are such fun characters! I love the style and gestures. The sign on the back of the yeti is hilarious! Great job!

                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                                      • mag
                                        mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                        Sooo... where would Ye Ye the Yeti live? ๐Ÿ™‚
                                        For now, Iโ€™m gathering references and doodling thumbnails. Iโ€™ve never done a house design with this much care and preparation before... it will be great to see how big of a difference it will make! 2781D140-458B-4DB2-9EB5-6F559755A9AE.jpeg

                                        Mag
                                        https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                        http://mag.takac.name

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                                        • Dima Eichhorn
                                          Dima Eichhorn @mag last edited by

                                          @mag I think the best would be your last design, the bigger one, but you may consider 1-storage(floor) only. (like the last reference image)

                                          https://www.instagram.com/dima_eichhorn/

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                                          • donnamakesart
                                            donnamakesart last edited by

                                            I just love your work haha. Congrats on winning!!! I was cheering YeYe while watching the critic haha. Looking forward to your house design!

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