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    Ye Ye the Yeti and his home... contest WIP

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    • MichaelaH
      MichaelaH @mag last edited by

      @mag It is awesome, love the yeti character, it is innovative and has a "real" character...I love the cute face and it has really your style, so when I saw it on IG inmidiatly I knew, this is from Mag. I love the little kid, at that age all kids look like male and female so don't let it bother you if somebody says so. I love the kid, cute posture and I think girl or boy would love to read story about this little kid with his/her friends.

      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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      • mag
        mag Pro SVS OG @Meg Clayburn last edited by

        @Meg-Clayburn thanks so much for your input. It helped me a lot! 🙂

        Mag
        https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
        http://mag.takac.name

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        • mag
          mag Pro SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by

          @MichaelaH thank you! It’s sometimes hard for me to decide if the kid should be girl or boy, when the story suits for both... in this case I think I’ll give it a time and decide once I’ll have more “story material” to work with. 🙂

          Mag
          https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
          http://mag.takac.name

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          • mag
            mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Thank you all for your kind support. I’m sharing some of the progress pictures. It was a great challenge and every one did a great job!6920AA47-79DD-4ECC-9724-BB5E94BB88FF.jpeg AA55F427-32E5-4CBB-A637-9434DD0ADD17.jpeg 7A31EB46-4D76-465D-AC99-8ACE30A06011.jpeg

            Mag
            https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
            http://mag.takac.name

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            • aska
              aska last edited by

              Such a great story and designs!

              Aska
              www.mugaska.com
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              • aska
                aska @aska last edited by

                @aska reminds me of Totoro 🙂

                Aska
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                • Meg Clayburn
                  Meg Clayburn @mag last edited by

                  @mag glad it helped! It turned out AWESOME! I love it so much!

                  Meg Clayburn

                  Instagram.com/meg_clayburn

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                  • Kim Rosenlof
                    Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                    These are such fun characters! I love the style and gestures. The sign on the back of the yeti is hilarious! Great job!

                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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                    • mag
                      mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Sooo... where would Ye Ye the Yeti live? 🙂
                      For now, I’m gathering references and doodling thumbnails. I’ve never done a house design with this much care and preparation before... it will be great to see how big of a difference it will make! 2781D140-458B-4DB2-9EB5-6F559755A9AE.jpeg

                      Mag
                      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                      http://mag.takac.name

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                      • Dima Eichhorn
                        Dima Eichhorn @mag last edited by

                        @mag I think the best would be your last design, the bigger one, but you may consider 1-storage(floor) only. (like the last reference image)

                        https://www.instagram.com/dima_eichhorn/

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                        • donnamakesart
                          donnamakesart last edited by

                          I just love your work haha. Congrats on winning!!! I was cheering YeYe while watching the critic haha. Looking forward to your house design!

                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/donnamakesart/
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                          • mag
                            mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            Sooo... after drawing like a ton of different houses and cabins, I realised, my Yeti would probably never lived in a house from bricks and stones. He’s a forest creature, from our fluffy and cute bohemian woods, so I’ve came up with all new sketch and designed his home under open sky.
                            Do you guys have any thoughts/critiques? I’m not entirely sure if It’s according to the rules of this month prompt cause this is not an actual “house” but it is his home ... so maybe it’s ok? 🤓
                            4C490BC0-F26D-4B4A-97A6-41D8206BEAE7.jpeg

                            Mag
                            https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                            http://mag.takac.name

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                            • donnamakesart
                              donnamakesart @mag last edited by

                              @mag love haha. Now that you point it out... but I would’t change a thing haha.

                              PS: may I ask what brush you use? I’ve been exploring digital art recently.

                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/donnamakesart/
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                              Website: https://donnamakesart.com/

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                              • mag
                                mag Pro SVS OG @donnamakesart last edited by

                                @donnamakesart thank you! 😁
                                I did the sketch in Procreate and used the default 6b sketch pencil. The value is done in the gouache paint brush. 😊

                                Mag
                                https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                http://mag.takac.name

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                                • Jacy13
                                  Jacy13 @mag last edited by

                                  @mag I love this concept even more than the original homes in your thumbnail sketches! I think your style will really show through with this piece! 🙂

                                  Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
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                                  • mag
                                    mag Pro SVS OG @Jacy13 last edited by

                                    @Jacy13 thank you! Im really curious to see all the entries together!

                                    Mag
                                    https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                    http://mag.takac.name

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                                    • mag
                                      mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                      I think I’m pretty much done here... but before I post it officially, I’ll sleep on it... do you see something that could be better/changed?
                                      Thanks everyone and good luck with this month prompt!7E4900B3-B594-4B7B-9295-3F9B4CD3714F.jpeg

                                      Mag
                                      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                                      http://mag.takac.name

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                                      • KaraDaniel
                                        KaraDaniel @mag last edited by

                                        @mag this is so fabulous I love it! My first impression (I'm viewing from my phone) is that it is all very light and around the same tone. Wonder if looking at it in grey scale would be helpful? It may just be my eyes and phone though and it also may be what you were going for but either way good work! 🙂

                                        instagram.com/sha_kara
                                        karadaniel.net

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                                        • donnamakesart
                                          donnamakesart last edited by

                                          I would like to see suggestions of tress in the background and perhaps darken the fence so it doesn’t blend in with the snow. otherwise, perfect. A clear winner yet again haha.

                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/donnamakesart/
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                                          • Georgios Christopoulos
                                            Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                                            this is beautiful! i agree with @donnamakesart ,maybe darken the fence a little!! Awesome work!

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