Feedback Welcomed - Sequential Work for my Website!
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@Michael-Angelo-Go hi. My one suggestion is that maybe the mom is bending over, hugging the girl.
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@Nyrryl-Cadiz Okay here's an update. I've been slowing down these days. I need to listen to that burnout podcast.
I'm trying a new technique where I draw everything in grayscale then add in color later. I think this composition will be very strong if there is a clear figure-ground (black part and white part).
I started working on the dad. I think the values are okay at the moment. I'm sort of guessing the lighting of this scene already. Oh and I already changed the pose for Maganda and her nanay. I think they look closer than ever.
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Ooh ooh @NessIllustration look at this!
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@Michael-Angelo-Go How pretty! This is a step above your other work, Michael! Try to add a bit more contrast to improve readability! For instance,the little girl's hair darker to distinguish it more from her hair. You could also move around the foliage in the window a little bit so the mom's head clearly pops out against the sky
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@NessIllustration Oh I forgot to mention I'm not done. I'll add an update later today! I didn't add the fan as you can see.
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@Nyrryl-Cadiz @NessIllustration
I just finished rendering the scene. I added some motion blur, but I'm worried it might be overkill. Should I add some blur, no blur, or only a little bit of in-between? Let me know what you all think!
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@Michael-Angelo-Go I prefer without, it just looks nice and crisp This is probably my favorite piece of yours ever! I love the limited color palette and the emotions. I do think you could push your blacks a bit more black to make the contrast sharper though!
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@Michael-Angelo-Go Like so?
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@NessIllustration no blur and perhaps increase the value contrast.
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My next drawing.
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I darkened the values, but now I'm thinking maybe the mother's shirt sticks out too much because it's a little saturated.
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Subtle but feels much better.
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Progress you guys!
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This one's taking a little while to render.
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That's all for tonight folks. Goodnight. I know the lighting's really ....eh but I'll fix it's still a wip.