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      • Asyas_illos
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        Gotta get going on the close up next! Any thoughts how I could improve anything?

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        • Valerie Light
          Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos She's really cute, Asya! I like the head to body proportion that you chose for her, and I think you're on a great track. I think you could maybe go further with the design of her accessories to give more hints about what kind of world she lives in. Maybe it's the shape of her knife, or a pattern on her bag, or some special tool that would make sense in her environment. Also, you could show some more character by making sure the facial expressions of the 3/4 front pose and the running pose are a bit more different from each other.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

            @Valerie-Light thank you for the helpful feedback I had done a little adjustment to faces since my last post, but thinking I may have her looking backwards. Also gave her another accessory necklace ,I had thought to put more detail into her poncho in the more detailed stages. Here’s where I am at now.

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            • Asyas_illos
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              She is from a treetop dwelling village so I’m still trying to figure out how to incorporate more of that into her design. I feel like the leaves and twigs in her hair is a good start but you’d still never know just based on that that she lives in the trees. Maybe I’ll change her pendant to an acorn...?

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              • Katherine
                Katherine last edited by

                She's really great! I love the chipmunk. I'd love to see more gear. We had this elfin nymph-like photographer at our wedding. She was very slight of frame but had this oversized photography gear bag slung across her chest and hanging from her waist. She looked incredibly cool. I think that's the direction I'd take it.

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                  Asyas_illos @Katherine last edited by

                  @Katherine that sounds super cute I can picture it my mind but I think my gal likes to travel light maybe I can think of a few more trinkets to hang on her though like a canteen or pot. Give pip a little knapsack lol

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                  • ruth
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                    She's really cute! I think the idea of naive but stouthearted really comes across. I was thinking about her being a tree-dweller and maybe her hair could have actually have leaves growing out of it? Although I guess once you get to the colours and patterns that will echo her native environment anyway. And I love Pip! I've been giggling over his little toot as he sits on her shoulder. Maybe she should be holding her nose? 🙂

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @ruth last edited by

                      @ruth thank you so much! Yes hopefully she’ll come together more as I move forward. I’ve been playing around with her expression to match his action a little more😉the little stinker

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                      • miranda-hoover
                        miranda-hoover @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos Pip so so cute!

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                          Asyas_illos @miranda-hoover last edited by

                          @miranda-hoover thanks!

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                            Ok I made a few small adjustments but I think this is it. I’m going to start on some color schemes and I’ll be back for opinions!

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                                Made a lot of progress today!

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                                  Finished!

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                                    Jeremiahbrown @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos This is great! It's been awesome to see artists in this forum grow in their skill as time progresses and your skills have grown a lot in the last several months! Your hard work is definitely showing! Keep up the good work!

                                    Jeremiah Brown
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                                      Asyas_illos @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                                      @Jeremiahbrown thank you for the encouraging words I too can see my progress and I couldn’t be more thankful to the svs community!

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                                          C910FC45-7B36-460F-ACF1-416CCC530655.jpeg been working on some more sketches of juniper and pip trying out different poses and expressions .

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                                          • K.Flagg
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                                            haha love her facial expression on the right. She's definitely got personality.

                                            K.Flagg

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