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    • Katherine
      Katherine last edited by

      She's really great! I love the chipmunk. I'd love to see more gear. We had this elfin nymph-like photographer at our wedding. She was very slight of frame but had this oversized photography gear bag slung across her chest and hanging from her waist. She looked incredibly cool. I think that's the direction I'd take it.

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      instagram: instagram.com/katherinetysonart

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Katherine last edited by

        @Katherine that sounds super cute I can picture it my mind but I think my gal likes to travel light maybe I can think of a few more trinkets to hang on her though like a canteen or pot. Give pip a little knapsack lol

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        • ruth
          ruth last edited by

          She's really cute! I think the idea of naive but stouthearted really comes across. I was thinking about her being a tree-dweller and maybe her hair could have actually have leaves growing out of it? Although I guess once you get to the colours and patterns that will echo her native environment anyway. And I love Pip! I've been giggling over his little toot as he sits on her shoulder. Maybe she should be holding her nose? šŸ™‚

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @ruth last edited by

            @ruth thank you so much! Yes hopefully she’ll come together more as I move forward. I’ve been playing around with her expression to match his action a little morešŸ˜‰the little stinker

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            • miranda-hoover
              miranda-hoover @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos Pip so so cute!

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @miranda-hoover last edited by

                @miranda-hoover thanks!

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                • Asyas_illos
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                  Ok I made a few small adjustments but I think this is it. I’m going to start on some color schemes and I’ll be back for opinions!

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                    • Asyas_illos
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                      Made a lot of progress today!

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                        Finished!

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                        • Jeremiahbrown
                          Jeremiahbrown @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos This is great! It's been awesome to see artists in this forum grow in their skill as time progresses and your skills have grown a lot in the last several months! Your hard work is definitely showing! Keep up the good work!

                          Jeremiah Brown
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                            Asyas_illos @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

                            @Jeremiahbrown thank you for the encouraging words I too can see my progress and I couldn’t be more thankful to the svs community!

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                C910FC45-7B36-460F-ACF1-416CCC530655.jpeg been working on some more sketches of juniper and pip trying out different poses and expressions .

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                                • K.Flagg
                                  K.Flagg last edited by

                                  haha love her facial expression on the right. She's definitely got personality.

                                  K.Flagg

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @K.Flagg last edited by

                                    @K-Flagg I just love her at this point! Maybe form a story around her...?

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                                      After today’s critique arena I finished up some more sketches I had been doing of juniper and pip. I am beginning to think that my first spread isn’t showing enough ā€œcharacterā€ they said gesture is so important and since there’s not much gesture you can do with a ā€œneutralā€ pose I thought maybe I needed more expression. Any thoughts? Which do you like better? A combination of both?

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                                      • Valerie Light
                                        Valerie Light last edited by

                                        The first page of characters has a great variety of facial expressions. It's looking really cute! Maybe there could be one where she's looking directly at us? One thing I notice about all of these poses is that the torso is pretty much a straight line from hips to shoulders. If that's a style choice, then nevermind, but one of the classes (I forget which one) talked about making bean-shaped torsos, with a curved line of the spine. I feel like you could add a whole other layer of expression, mood, & intention by doing some quickie gesture drawings that play with that.

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

                                          @Valerie-Light thank you for the feedback. I know! 😫I want to play around with gesture a lot more I just don’t want to stray too far from the wholeā€neutralā€ thing maybe I can do a sheet that’s completely detached from the contest and just have fun with her because that’s what I really want to do!

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                                          • Valerie Light
                                            Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos honestly I am taking a lot of liberties with the neutral pose in my Traveler and my Yetis. I don't figure that I'm going to win a contest any time soon, so I'm just trying to make images that feel like good practice for myself and my portfolio. šŸ¤·šŸ»ā™€

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