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      A Former User last edited by

      in term of readability and composition i think its better than the previous one.

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      • HeatherBouteneff
        HeatherBouteneff @Freya Chakour last edited by

        @Freya-Chakour great job! The lighting is so lovely especially the willow

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        • Freya Chakour
          Freya Chakour last edited by

          @CLCanadyArts @HeatherBouteneff thank you so much for your feedback :3 it is greatly appreciated and helped me a lot to hang on to this piece and finish it! I will post the final in a moment (still need to do some test printing and sometimes after seeing the print I go back and change a few things here and there, but for now I am happy with the result)

          https://www.instagram.com/fyra.c/
          Portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/fyrac

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          • Freya Chakour
            Freya Chakour last edited by

            soo that's the final! it was definitely a challenging piece for me, but also I learned a ton. Thank you all again for your feedback!

            Unbenanntesby the lake small_Projekt 58.png

            https://www.instagram.com/fyra.c/
            Portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/fyrac

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            • baileyvidler
              baileyvidler last edited by

              @Freya-Chakour This is gorgeous!! The textures and colors are magical.

              Bailey Vidler
              Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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              • KayPotter
                KayPotter @Freya Chakour last edited by

                @Freya-Chakour
                So beautiful, and makes me want to know more for sure. It was great to see your process and edits!

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                • Jacy13
                  Jacy13 @Freya Chakour last edited by

                  @Freya-Chakour Amazing work! The colors are just perfect 😃

                  Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
                  Portfolio: https://jacy13.artstation.com/

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                  • SheerArt
                    SheerArt last edited by

                    Awesome!

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                    • APHOTICMOTH
                      APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                      It turned out so nice! Is the water nymph picking a bouquet for the elven girl? ❤ I love it.

                      All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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                      • carlianne
                        carlianne @Freya Chakour last edited by

                        @Freya-Chakour you did such a fantastic job applying the feedback! It looks great ❤️

                        Check out my art and tutorials :)

                        Instagram: www.instagram.com/carliannecreates/

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                        Shop: www.carliannecreates.com

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                        • Freya Chakour
                          Freya Chakour last edited by

                          @baileyvidler @KayPotter @Jacy13 @SheerArt @carlianne thank you so much for your kind words! I apprechimade your words, feedback and support a lot!

                          @CLCanadyArts Thank you so much! Yeah I imagined something like that, I also had this idea that they are living somewhere in a house half underwater, half above the sea level, in a kind of shared apartment situation, that I hope to explore in a future illustration : )

                          https://www.instagram.com/fyra.c/
                          Portfolio: https://www.artstation.com/fyrac

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