Critique requested
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Hi guys,
I’ve made a (very late) drawing for the March contest. I wonder if anyone has some tips and critique for my turnaround? I feel like the hat is off in some places...
Btw I didn’t draw the hair or arm to show off the body better.
My idea was to have a traveler that works for the railway. I tried to go for a timeless vaguely vintage uniform. The character is preteen btw!
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Adjusted the hat in the third pose
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These are great. She looks fun. One subtle thing – be careful with the shoulders. Your 3/4 shots look like their shot from a higher angle. While the back shoulder should be smaller, they should still be on the same plane like the front and side shots.
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she look so cute!! and just a little thing, but the ears in the first pose are a bit to high, also the left pocket on her backside is a bit to much to the right side. also I really love how you rendered her her at the last post! looks so fluffy and beautiful!
