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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      Would this pose be considered running or walking? he’s supposed to be pouncing…
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      • Larue
        Larue @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos I think if you show this "pounce"from the side it would work better to fulfill the running/ walking requirement. I'm more a dog girl but this lil guy is really cute.

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        • Rachel Horne
          Rachel Horne @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos looking very cute!

          www.rachel-horne.com
          instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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          • Rachel Horne
            Rachel Horne @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos I agree with @Larue - a side angle would work better, I couldn't immediately work out his front paws...:)

            www.rachel-horne.com
            instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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            • Janette
              Janette last edited by

              Awwww .... So cute, and love the colours!

              Art is hard.
              https://www.instagram.com/janettehillart/

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Larue @Rachel-Horne thank you for the feedback maybe I'll keep this one an extra and do it from the side… thanks again!👍🏼😻

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @Janette last edited by

                  @Janette thanks! 😺 I love these colors together too!

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    Here's where I'm at now gonna rework the running/pouncing pose though
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                    I flipped the canvas and discovered I like the orange patches on his other side.

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                    • Melissa_Bailey
                      Melissa_Bailey @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos SO very cute!

                      Just two little observations:

                      1. The front view looks head-on instead of 3/4 view -- would hate for a little thing like that to keep this cutie out of the top 16.
                      2. The stark black base color is so deep it makes him hard to read. Lightening it just a tad could help. What about testing out a deep indigo, charcoal, or inky purple base color? It might read as black but would be more visually interesting and allow for more value which will make him easier to read.

                      Loving what you've come up with so far! Looking forward to seeing where you go from here.

                      illustrator - author - smiley person
                      mbaileyart.com
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                      • TaniaGomesArt
                        TaniaGomesArt last edited by

                        He looks really cute!!! 🙂

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                          @Melissa-Bailey-0 thanks for your input, it’s helpful as always! I will add some more highlights when I am done with all the images to hopefully add a bit more dimension to the black. 😸

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

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                            So I decided to use the pounce for the close up and went with a different running pose. But I’m having trouble with the ears? I m not sure if it’s working or should they both be back maybe almost completely flat?

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

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                              went with the ears back pose. just a couple finishing and I think I’m done😸

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Ok working on Albert number two! getting in my groove now😎
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos @Asyas_illos last edited by

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

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                                    making some headway on Albert #2

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by

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                                      Got all my rough sketching down let me know if you guys see something I may have missed, on to painting!

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        So after sitting down with my daughter to take a closer look at koalas we discovered they don’t have a tail . Like AT ALL. I thought they at least had like a little flap tail kinda like a panda but nope no flap, nothing. So I adjusted my character accordingly.😅
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                                          amywhite last edited by amywhite

                                          I love how the eyes popping up, Such a cute character.😁

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                                          • Asyas_illos
                                            Asyas_illos @amywhite last edited by

                                            @amywhite thanks!

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