A fresh start March wip
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So this is where I am today, still struggling with the storytelling I think. Right now its just a girl buying a goldfish, any ides how I can elaborate? Maybe a parent in the background trying to persuade her to get something else? I don't want to over complicate it but I know it needs something else… a toucan maybe?
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So finally found my story with the goldfish… tell me what you see based off this very rough sketch. (Knowing goldfish are supposed to be good luck of course)
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Does this perspective seem ok? I brought it out a tiny bit so it could breathe a little more. I’ve never been good with perspective I think it’s like a math thing, I can’t ever wrap my brain around it! No matter how times I try to do the classes. Luckily for the most part I can fake it pretty well especially if I’ve got reference.
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@asyas_illos This is a cute sketch for sure, and I like the POV you chose. I'm finding the Lucky prompt really tough to nail down storytelling-wise. It's really hard to convey that someone is lucky BECAUSE of something.
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@valerie-light l am having trouble with that too my first two entries I had to rely on the speech bubbles without them I don’t think they would convey what I intended
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Moving along with the second to the series…
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Ok sending this one in! I do want to ask if you guys think my character is consistent. I think I might do one more for good practice
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This started out as sketch for "Riley" but with little magic and "bad luck” I now have another entry in the works. Do you have any feed back as far as story or composition? I cant remember what the guys said about illustrating the moment. Is it better just before, during or after? I did two positions for the bird indicating either the moment before or during. Which do you think is better?
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@Asyas_illos those little birds are everywhere, aren’t they? Heh. So position 1 doesn’t tell me it will end up at position 2. However, since the collision just took place, or so it seems, was she already riding off the hill?
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@crispalomino lol yes they doing an epic jump!
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What if there were more birds! Muwahahahaha!
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Figured out my color palette now on to fun part!
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Tightening things up a bit
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Almost done with this one I’m glad I went with this because I needed more practice with environments
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All done!
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(sighs) yes, I started another one
️ I had to do one that was a little more traditional, according to the month.
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Not sure I’m vibin’ with my color palette…
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Ok finished this one up to be honest I kinda lost momentum with this one…
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@Asyas_illos I think this one needs thickness to the wall. It took me a moment to realize that it was a cat peering through a mouse hole, and not the Loch Ness monster coming up from a lake. I could also just be very tired lol.
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@AngelinaKizz aww man you’re totally right! I didn’t catch that! It’s been submitted already and I don’t want to create more work for Austin so I guess it is what is…
