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    • Valerie Light
      Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @asyas_illos This is a cute sketch for sure, and I like the POV you chose. I'm finding the Lucky prompt really tough to nail down storytelling-wise. It's really hard to convey that someone is lucky BECAUSE of something. šŸ¤·šŸ»ā™‚

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

        @valerie-light l am having trouble with that too my first two entries I had to rely on the speech bubbles without them I don’t think they would convey what I intended

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by

          Moving along with the second to the series…
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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

            Ok sending this one in! I do want to ask if you guys think my character is consistent. I think I might do one more for good practicešŸ¤”
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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              This started out as sketch for "Riley" but with little magic and "bad luckā€ I now have another entry in the works. Do you have any feed back as far as story or composition? I cant remember what the guys said about illustrating the moment. Is it better just before, during or after? I did two positions for the bird indicating either the moment before or during. Which do you think is better?
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              • crispalomino
                crispalomino @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos those little birds are everywhere, aren’t they? Heh. So position 1 doesn’t tell me it will end up at position 2. However, since the collision just took place, or so it seems, was she already riding off the hill?

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos @crispalomino last edited by

                  @crispalomino lol yes they doing an epic jump!

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                    What if there were more birds! Muwahahahaha!
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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos last edited by

                      Figured out my color palette now on to fun part!F39B0010-4FD0-4F25-ADD4-903A870EE57B.jpeg

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        Tightening things up a bit😊B6B30597-C162-4DBF-9219-4A23C35452E6.jpeg

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Almost done with this one I’m glad I went with this because I needed more practice with environments
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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            All done!
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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              (sighs) yes, I started another onešŸ¤¦šŸ»ā€ā™€ļø I had to do one that was a little more traditional, according to the month.
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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Not sure I’m vibin’ with my color palette…
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  Ok finished this one up to be honest I kinda lost momentum with this one…
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                                  • AngelinaKizz
                                    AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos I think this one needs thickness to the wall. It took me a moment to realize that it was a cat peering through a mouse hole, and not the Loch Ness monster coming up from a lake. I could also just be very tired lol.

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                      @AngelinaKizz aww man you’re totally right! I didn’t catch that! It’s been submitted already and I don’t want to create more work for Austin so I guess it is what is…

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