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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      So finally found my story with the goldfish… tell me what you see based off this very rough sketch. (Knowing goldfish are supposed to be good luck of course)
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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

        Does this perspective seem ok? I brought it out a tiny bit so it could breathe a little more. I’ve never been good with perspective I think it’s like a math thing, I can’t ever wrap my brain around it! No matter how times I try to do the classes. Luckily for the most part I can fake it pretty well especially if I’ve got reference.
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        • Valerie Light
          Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @asyas_illos This is a cute sketch for sure, and I like the POV you chose. I'm finding the Lucky prompt really tough to nail down storytelling-wise. It's really hard to convey that someone is lucky BECAUSE of something. 🤷🏻♂

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

            @valerie-light l am having trouble with that too my first two entries I had to rely on the speech bubbles without them I don’t think they would convey what I intended

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos last edited by

              Moving along with the second to the series…
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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                Ok sending this one in! I do want to ask if you guys think my character is consistent. I think I might do one more for good practice🤔
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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  This started out as sketch for "Riley" but with little magic and "bad luck” I now have another entry in the works. Do you have any feed back as far as story or composition? I cant remember what the guys said about illustrating the moment. Is it better just before, during or after? I did two positions for the bird indicating either the moment before or during. Which do you think is better?
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                  • crispalomino
                    crispalomino @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos those little birds are everywhere, aren’t they? Heh. So position 1 doesn’t tell me it will end up at position 2. However, since the collision just took place, or so it seems, was she already riding off the hill?

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @crispalomino last edited by

                      @crispalomino lol yes they doing an epic jump!

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        What if there were more birds! Muwahahahaha!
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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Figured out my color palette now on to fun part!F39B0010-4FD0-4F25-ADD4-903A870EE57B.jpeg

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                          • Asyas_illos
                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                            Tightening things up a bit😊B6B30597-C162-4DBF-9219-4A23C35452E6.jpeg

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

                              Almost done with this one I’m glad I went with this because I needed more practice with environments
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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                All done!
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                                • Asyas_illos
                                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  (sighs) yes, I started another one🤦🏻‍♀️ I had to do one that was a little more traditional, according to the month.
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                                  • Asyas_illos
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                                    Not sure I’m vibin’ with my color palette…
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                                    • Asyas_illos
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                                      Ok finished this one up to be honest I kinda lost momentum with this one…
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                                      • AngelinaKizz
                                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos I think this one needs thickness to the wall. It took me a moment to realize that it was a cat peering through a mouse hole, and not the Loch Ness monster coming up from a lake. I could also just be very tired lol.

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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                          @AngelinaKizz aww man you’re totally right! I didn’t catch that! It’s been submitted already and I don’t want to create more work for Austin so I guess it is what is…

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