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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @Mike Marttila last edited by

      @Mike-Marttila thank you and yes since I darkened the sky even more not sure how it’d work out.

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      • Asyas_illos
        Asyas_illos last edited by

        So sketched out some more characters what do you guys think Im stuck between two…
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        • AngelinaKizz
          AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

          @Asyas_illos I think the elephant is a good one, because you can lean his Grey into a blue and complement the orange while having enough contrast to the charcoal clouds. You could also push the size to make it funnier.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

            @AngelinaKizz yes I would definitely increase his size for sure!

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            • KevinTreaccar
              KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by KevinTreaccar

              @Asyas_illos I also vote for the elephant.

              A) Thanks to its weight, it’s the funniest in a plane.
              B )I think the giraffe would need to be in a more uniquely shaped craft to fit right.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                Well I did one one with a person just to see and I like it too…
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                • demotlj
                  demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                  Both the elephant and the giraffe made me laugh as soon as I saw them so I vote for those.

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                  • ArtMelC
                    ArtMelC @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos elephant has my vote!

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                    • Kristen Lango
                      Kristen Lango @demotlj last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos I second what @demotlj said!

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                        Playing with size and cropping
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                        • Patricia Dishmon
                          Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos I like the composition of the first one. It brings more focus to the storm itself and not whoever is in the plane, though. Which do you want to focus on?

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                            Asyas_illos @Patricia Dishmon last edited by

                            @Patricia-Dishmon thank you and I agree I have since decided to omit the plane and going hot air balloon!
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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos last edited by

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                              • Kristen Lango
                                Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                @Asyas_illos I like the balloon idea! But I think your colors were working better with that yellow - it really pops against the clouds. But I suppose it depends what you're going for. Maybe you can put a brightly colored or high value character in that balloon and really draw the attention there.

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                                • Patricia Dishmon
                                  Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos Cute! And I agree with @Kristen-Lango The bright color of the plane was great! If you do put a bright colored character in there, don't forget to tie the colors into the balloon.

                                  Also, why is it that I suddenly feel that the white at the bottom is too white? I'd take the whole background and shift it down so that there are only a few spots of white (maybe from lightning?) and fill in the top with that really dark gray.

                                  I can't wait to see the next update! You work so quickly 😃

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                                    @Kristen-Lango thanks yes I’ve added more detail now

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                      Still a work in progress!
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                                      • Valerie Light
                                        Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos ooh, i love this green pattern against the dark sky! 😍

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                                        • Kristen Lango
                                          Kristen Lango @Valerie Light last edited by

                                          @Asyas_illos me too! what @Valerie-Light said!

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                                            Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

                                            @Valerie-Light @Kristen-Lango thank you 😊

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