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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

      @AngelinaKizz yes I would definitely increase his size for sure!

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      • KevinTreaccar
        KevinTreaccar @Asyas_illos last edited by KevinTreaccar

        @Asyas_illos I also vote for the elephant.

        A) Thanks to its weight, itโ€™s the funniest in a plane.
        B )I think the giraffe would need to be in a more uniquely shaped craft to fit right.

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

          Well I did one one with a person just to see and I like it tooโ€ฆ
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          • demotlj
            demotlj SVS OG last edited by

            Both the elephant and the giraffe made me laugh as soon as I saw them so I vote for those.

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            • ArtMelC
              ArtMelC @Asyas_illos last edited by

              @Asyas_illos elephant has my vote!

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              • Kristen Lango
                Kristen Lango @demotlj last edited by

                @Asyas_illos I second what @demotlj said!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  Playing with size and cropping
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                  • Patricia Dishmon
                    Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                    @Asyas_illos I like the composition of the first one. It brings more focus to the storm itself and not whoever is in the plane, though. Which do you want to focus on?

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                    • Asyas_illos
                      Asyas_illos @Patricia Dishmon last edited by

                      @Patricia-Dishmon thank you and I agree I have since decided to omit the plane and going hot air balloon!
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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos last edited by

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                        • Kristen Lango
                          Kristen Lango @Asyas_illos last edited by

                          @Asyas_illos I like the balloon idea! But I think your colors were working better with that yellow - it really pops against the clouds. But I suppose it depends what you're going for. Maybe you can put a brightly colored or high value character in that balloon and really draw the attention there.

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                          • Patricia Dishmon
                            Patricia Dishmon @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos Cute! And I agree with @Kristen-Lango The bright color of the plane was great! If you do put a bright colored character in there, don't forget to tie the colors into the balloon.

                            Also, why is it that I suddenly feel that the white at the bottom is too white? I'd take the whole background and shift it down so that there are only a few spots of white (maybe from lightning?) and fill in the top with that really dark gray.

                            I can't wait to see the next update! You work so quickly ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos @Kristen Lango last edited by

                              @Kristen-Lango thanks yes Iโ€™ve added more detail now

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                                Still a work in progress!
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                                • Valerie Light
                                  Valerie Light @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos ooh, i love this green pattern against the dark sky! ๐Ÿ˜

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                                  • Kristen Lango
                                    Kristen Lango @Valerie Light last edited by

                                    @Asyas_illos me too! what @Valerie-Light said!

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @Valerie Light last edited by

                                      @Valerie-Light @Kristen-Lango thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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                                      • Asyas_illos
                                        Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        Not much progress here been writing a lot lately๐Ÿ˜Š
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                                        • Asyas_illos
                                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          Might add a couple more balloons caught in the storm
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                                          • Katherine
                                            Katherine @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            @Asyas_illos I think the hot air balloon concept is a winner, Asya! You could have fun experimenting with lots of different compositions and perspectives with this. I'd definitely play around with a composition that brings the hot air balloon forward so we can see the expression on their faces and the gestures better. Maybe there's some action going on in the basket that tells a bit of a story?

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