May stormN wip(s)
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So sketched out some more characters what do you guys think Im stuck between two…
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@Asyas_illos I think the elephant is a good one, because you can lean his Grey into a blue and complement the orange while having enough contrast to the charcoal clouds. You could also push the size to make it funnier.
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@AngelinaKizz yes I would definitely increase his size for sure!
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@Asyas_illos I also vote for the elephant.
A) Thanks to its weight, it’s the funniest in a plane.
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Well I did one one with a person just to see and I like it too…
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Both the elephant and the giraffe made me laugh as soon as I saw them so I vote for those.
Laurie DeMott
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@Asyas_illos elephant has my vote!
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@Asyas_illos I second what @demotlj said!
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Playing with size and cropping
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@Asyas_illos I like the composition of the first one. It brings more focus to the storm itself and not whoever is in the plane, though. Which do you want to focus on?
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@Patricia-Dishmon thank you and I agree I have since decided to omit the plane and going hot air balloon!
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@Asyas_illos I like the balloon idea! But I think your colors were working better with that yellow - it really pops against the clouds. But I suppose it depends what you're going for. Maybe you can put a brightly colored or high value character in that balloon and really draw the attention there.
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@Asyas_illos Cute! And I agree with @Kristen-Lango The bright color of the plane was great! If you do put a bright colored character in there, don't forget to tie the colors into the balloon.
Also, why is it that I suddenly feel that the white at the bottom is too white? I'd take the whole background and shift it down so that there are only a few spots of white (maybe from lightning?) and fill in the top with that really dark gray.
I can't wait to see the next update! You work so quickly
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@Kristen-Lango thanks yes I’ve added more detail now
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Still a work in progress!
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@Asyas_illos ooh, i love this green pattern against the dark sky!
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@Asyas_illos me too! what @Valerie-Light said!
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@Valerie-Light @Kristen-Lango thank you
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Not much progress here been writing a lot lately
