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    My road race wips ^_^

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        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @Asyas_illos oooh it's super cute, definitely whimsical, but I'm not getting rabbit road race.. it would be prefect in a dreamy scenario though!

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @AngelinaKizz it’s basically a dream here’s the rest of the concept
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            Holumpa @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos Both pieces are gorgeous! I love the creativity in the second one and I admire your skills with environment/Background, such wonderful solutions.

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            • Eliana Bastidas
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              I like more the second option. Like I saw in previous comments, the characters are lost in the background a bit. In the second one it doesn’t happen.

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos @Holumpa last edited by

                @Holumpa thank you so much I usually struggle with creative background ideas so I’m really pushing myself!

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  I highlighted the grass behind the main character a bit maybe that helps him pop out a little more?
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                    Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                    Postin some progress😜
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                    • AngelinaKizz
                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos it's so good... I love it!

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                        Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                        @AngelinaKizz haha thanks

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos last edited by

                          Think I’m gonna sit on this for a couple days… feedback welcome!
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                          • AngelinaKizz
                            AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos I noticed one small thing, that when it's thumbnail sized, the bunny riding the carrot isn't as clear as I think he should be. His shirt dissipates into background, and the pink and orange seem to be of similar value (without doing a black and white flip).

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                              Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                              @AngelinaKizz thanks! Yes since I have the light shining on them from the star it washes out the bunnies darker tone and I’ll look into darker colored pajamas options 😊

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                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                I think this helps a little.? I don’t want to bring them much darker cuz it will then become similar in value to her fur… maybe she should have no pajamas? Would it still appear she is dreaming?
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                                • AngelinaKizz
                                  AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos I really like the changes you've made!

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                                  • Asyas_illos
                                    Asyas_illos last edited by

                                    Yep started another lol I’m from Northern California and live in the redwoods where we have a drive through tree, so this was inspired by that. Although these days you can probably only fit a vw bug or fiat through it. So my concept is one young bunny is too mesmerized by the giant trees he is being passed by the other runners. Thoughts?
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                                    • Asyas_illos
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                                      Update fitting characters into comp!

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                                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos absolutely gorgeous background design

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                                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                          @AngelinaKizz thank you I was a little worried it was a bit too saturated.

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                                            Asyas_illos last edited by

                                            I did a light blue overlay layer over the whole thing just to see if it would cool it off a bit.
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