My road race wips ^_^
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I like more the second option. Like I saw in previous comments, the characters are lost in the background a bit. In the second one it doesn’t happen.
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@Holumpa thank you so much I usually struggle with creative background ideas so I’m really pushing myself!
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I highlighted the grass behind the main character a bit maybe that helps him pop out a little more?
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Postin some progress
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@Asyas_illos it's so good... I love it!
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@AngelinaKizz haha thanks
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Think I’m gonna sit on this for a couple days… feedback welcome!
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@Asyas_illos I noticed one small thing, that when it's thumbnail sized, the bunny riding the carrot isn't as clear as I think he should be. His shirt dissipates into background, and the pink and orange seem to be of similar value (without doing a black and white flip).
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@AngelinaKizz thanks! Yes since I have the light shining on them from the star it washes out the bunnies darker tone and I’ll look into darker colored pajamas options
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I think this helps a little.? I don’t want to bring them much darker cuz it will then become similar in value to her fur… maybe she should have no pajamas? Would it still appear she is dreaming?
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@Asyas_illos I really like the changes you've made!
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Yep started another lol I’m from Northern California and live in the redwoods where we have a drive through tree, so this was inspired by that. Although these days you can probably only fit a vw bug or fiat through it. So my concept is one young bunny is too mesmerized by the giant trees he is being passed by the other runners. Thoughts?
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Update fitting characters into comp!
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@Asyas_illos absolutely gorgeous background design
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@AngelinaKizz thank you I was a little worried it was a bit too saturated.
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I did a light blue overlay layer over the whole thing just to see if it would cool it off a bit.
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@Asyas_illos The ghost bunnies are a great addition! I like that a lot and great job with your color palette too!
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@Asyas_illos I love this whimsical piece! I can totally feel that this is her dream and I think you've done a really nice job of making her color that pinkish coral - it really draws your eye there.
I'm thinking, one thing that might make it even stronger would be to make the fish a less warm color - the yellow is nice and lovely but its so bright I just wonder if they were perhaps a sea-foam green or a light purple if the story would be even clearer?
I'm only bringing this up because the fish are so beautifully done and I feel my eye wanting to look at them more than the main character.
But absolutely great work on this one!!
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@Kristen-Lango thank you for the feedback! I’ve already submitted but maybe I’ll play around with those colors and see what happens. Thanks!
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Whoops sideways… this one is obviously not a drive through but a walkthrough it’s been cut into an old stump, so it’s not a living tree anymore.
