My Superhero WIP – Captain Toots!

[KevinTreaccar]

Adjustments, removing the transformation for now.

[ArtMelC]

@KevinTreaccar I think it looks clearer without the transformation now but I need the fart cloud back!!! Current poses aren't very clear on what Captain Toot is about and I'm really digging the idea of a fart-powered flying baby superhero.

[Meekipink]

@ArtMelC Agreed! That should be the action pose, haha.

[KevinTreaccar]

@ArtMelC @Meekipink Good news, the fart noise is already incorporated into the action pose! Just need to ink the sketch.

I might even be adding a bonus pose with a bonus fart noise…

[KevinTreaccar]

The fart cloud/sound effect returns...

[kirsten-mcg]

@KevinTreaccar I agree that this is much clearer without the transformation! And your subtle is great! I did a draw over for an idea I had to make it a little more clear that this is a fart rather than just a burst of air from his speed. I'm so excited to see this one finished!

[KevinTreaccar]

@kirsten-mcg Awesome! Thanks! That exact thought about it possibly not being the right cloud shape ran through my mind this morning. Thanks for pointing that out. I like your tweak.

[KevinTreaccar]

Still need to adjust the fart punch cloud (and add color and shadow), but I've finished the required poses.

I plan on adding one more pose on the right side, though. Captain Toots flying off (with another fart noise trailing behind). Adding a 6th pose doesn't disqualify us, correct?

Thanks

[KevinTreaccar]

How does this look before I add shading and color?

[KevinTreaccar]

Color added...

[KevinTreaccar]

And some shading now, too. See anything I need to fix?

Thanks

[KevinTreaccar]

Wanted to say thank you again to everyone who helped bring Captain Toots to life. Thank you!