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    My Superhero WIP – Captain Toots!

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    • ArtMelC
      ArtMelC @KevinTreaccar last edited by

      @KevinTreaccar I think it looks clearer without the transformation now but I need the fart cloud back!!! Current poses aren't very clear on what Captain Toot is about and I'm really digging the idea of a fart-powered flying baby superhero.

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      • Meekipink
        Meekipink @ArtMelC last edited by

        @ArtMelC Agreed! That should be the action pose, haha.

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        • KevinTreaccar
          KevinTreaccar @Meekipink last edited by KevinTreaccar

          @ArtMelC @Meekipink Good news, the fart noise is already incorporated into the action pose! Just need to ink the sketch.

          I might even be adding a bonus pose with a bonus fart noise…

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          • KevinTreaccar
            KevinTreaccar last edited by

            The fart cloud/sound effect returns...
            TootsCharacterSheet-test5.jpg

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            • kirsten-mcg
              kirsten-mcg @KevinTreaccar last edited by

              @KevinTreaccar I agree that this is much clearer without the transformation! And your subtle is great! I did a draw over for an idea I had to make it a little more clear that this is a fart rather than just a burst of air from his speed. I'm so excited to see this one finished!1661352622339-tootscharactersheet-test5.jpg

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              • KevinTreaccar
                KevinTreaccar @kirsten-mcg last edited by

                @kirsten-mcg Awesome! Thanks! That exact thought about it possibly not being the right cloud shape ran through my mind this morning. Thanks for pointing that out. I like your tweak.

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                • KevinTreaccar
                  KevinTreaccar last edited by

                  Still need to adjust the fart punch cloud (and add color and shadow), but I've finished the required poses.

                  TootsCharacterSheet-test6.jpg

                  I plan on adding one more pose on the right side, though. Captain Toots flying off (with another fart noise trailing behind). Adding a 6th pose doesn't disqualify us, correct?

                  Thanks

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                  • KevinTreaccar
                    KevinTreaccar last edited by

                    How does this look before I add shading and color?

                    TootsCharacterSheet-test7.jpg

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                    • KevinTreaccar
                      KevinTreaccar last edited by

                      Color added...

                      TootsCharacterSheet-test8.jpg

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                      • KevinTreaccar
                        KevinTreaccar last edited by

                        And some shading now, too. See anything I need to fix?

                        Thanks

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                        • KevinTreaccar
                          KevinTreaccar last edited by

                          Wanted to say thank you again to everyone who helped bring Captain Toots to life. Thank you!

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